摘要
I’m gonna conquer the multiverse but before that.......
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Let me enjoy life first!
-- 推薦票
榜單 
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
LV 1
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Good writing quality, although a few oddities in the writing could be noticed. For now I can't say about updates. Story development, it's too soon for an objective judgement, but it feels good. Same for character design. World Background, you could have described Heaven more extensively. I will make another review at chapter 30.