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Reporter: October 28th is a time when most civilised cities would enjoy the festivities that is Halloween but this is Gotham. Our not-so-beloved city is more than terrifying when it comes to Halloween, no it's record-breaking when it comes to the sheer number of crimes committed in a single night and these only count the ones reported. But on this terrifying night miracle happened in East End. Last night Park Row was safe, yes the crime alley for one night was crime free. And it wasn't Batman who did it, no it was something else. A pack of mutant-like dogs stormed the streets. What we are about to show is a video taken from an apartment window. Viewer discretion is advised.
"Fetch Me Their Souls!!"
{AN: This is my first time writing. I wanted to take the gamer system and make it more solid. The system is based on cod games. using perks, skins with abilities, zombies, perk cola and other items.
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Very nice story and a very original and interesting story. My only real issue is that there isn't enough chapters.
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really good story great character and all the dialogue feels smooth barely any grammar mistakes only reason its not a 5star is for the lack of chapters
Great story concept. In all my time reading webnovel have I never come across a system that uses COD. Love the idea and the story. There is little to no grammatical errors. All in all it's a great story so keep up the good story, have a steady update schedule that your content with and keep on trucking!
this is amazing story good concept and idea it like living a serene life in mha system but call of duty good job author. hope the site has more stories like this.
This story, while not being that great of a concept, was handle excellently… up until chapter 13, then it nosedives. Firstly he gets nerfed just to make the fight “more intense” then he fails to use any of his actual skills and guns for that same reason. After he manages to KO them he instantly becomes a major simp and lets them sleep at his hotel because “CaNt hAvE tHe PoLiCe CoMIng oVeR bEcAuSe I kIlLeD ThEm” instead of throwing them out somewhere like a sane person. He also starts saying things like “I shouldnt have hurt your plants” which is probably the dumbest most simpy thing he could have said because it was HER THAT ATTACKED HIM WITH THEM. That is the only thing lowering my star rating. I dont care if you like a character IRL, its still aweful writing if you suddenly Nerf the MC and make them a simp because of it. Forget a COD player, ANY FPS player would have atleast shot her not fatally (and shut up about “hard to aim”, he literally had bullet time) and then dumped them somewhere far away from their building. THEY came in and attacked, THEY should suffer the consequences instead of being waited on by the person they just attacked and got KO’d by.
this is nostalgic, i still remember playing word at war on ps3, it was my first ps3 game but hackers will destroy the game, i had more than 4k hours of Black Ops 1 and then came the first golden age of Cod with BO 2 and Moder Warfer 2 I played every game from 2003 to vanguard (2021) and did all the ester eggs of the Zombies mode although some were disappointing (Cold War and its bad and easy ester eggs). For me this Fan Fic will be very nostalgic. google translate
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I have seen many stories from outside this app and inside. I can say without a doubt I love this one. It has everything I can hope for. And usually stories like these mess up the character attitudes. So far it is perfection. If it changes I shall redo a review. But this has potential to be one of the best stories I have ever read.