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Tec Is the mc I made him the others are not mine it's from their respective owners
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Bad grammar! no story development! Mc too op! ........................ ........................ ........................ It had a good start but you f***** up when u made the mc too op.
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Really good 👍 vhgmgdmmhmgmgmsgmgsmgsngsnsnsgngmgsjegmhnwgngwnsgmehmgngmgemehnwgnegnhenbrmrjnehnhrneynegnhenhemgwnhemgengngngngegmehngenehnehmehngemehnehnwgnwgmegnsyngenegnhenhenegny2nehnegnenhenegn wbwsgngnemdhmhrmhenhmdhngnhdmdhnsgnehhensgndhndgnsgngsngndhndhmhdmsgndgnhdmsgnwgk
Writing Well at least I can understand Seen worse sooo 2 stars Stability of updates? Not sure if its updated once per two weeks But i do not see any schedule and its not that hard to write about something that already exists so i cant call it stable 2 stars No plot to speak of No story to follow 1 star Characters? Random You cannot define any personality specific for The mc Hes once again Random I mean he could snap at any moment Or he could not His answer to everything is killing Has almost always angry me gets pissed off easily At anything You cannot define A specific scenario to.make A personality for him Maybe and thats maybe You could pose him as A typical arrogant chinese young master if you were to fit his emotions into this role It wont need much to begin with But it would be boring 1 star World background? How does it taste? 1 star None background Within The latest chapter I dont even know what is happening Even those things mentioned as A possible background are false on every perspective so far 1 star Overall 1.4 This is a really bad score And trust me I am lenient here simply because I Had an all nighter and want to go sleeping thus this short review If your Looking for op mc Sorry pseudo op mc Then This may be interesting... ... in The beginning The more you read? The worse it gets And by worse I mean boring as its essentially repeating itself Every single Time The same thing With no purpose direction Not something i would recommend
hello author, I really like your storyline, keep writing even though it's only been released for 6 months we will still be waiting
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It would have been way better if he were to have talked to his “dad”/light more but it was funny how he surpassed everyone and for the kid he shouldnt have gotten a person who had memories after there reincarnation
The cringe is real...............................................................................................................................
Understandable if The mc still had that kind of mentality on the first few chaps but men his characteristic did not change at all on 80's chap he still that traits and rest is still ok.
ThiS is a really food fanfiction i highly reCommend you reAd this the author is really good at wrightNg Its really unappreciated and i believe its top 100on the app
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I like reading about overpowered people just living their lives.👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊
I don't know much about English, but I like how this goes! very good story. Una pregunta, el protagonista será más OP o simplemente continuará igual?