摘要
*** A completed novel! ***
Arthur was a peerless sword cultivator possessed by experimenting and trials. After unlocking a great secret in cultivation, he was punished by heavens and transmigrated into the body of a worthless heir to a nameless clan in a world without spiritual energy.
The world is built on mages where they kill monsters and absorb their energy to form inner demons.
Follow Arthur's journey to build himself up from scratch and seek his former power again while his soul is tarnished by Willy's weak soul and many of his abilities and powers are sealed by heavens.
It's a story of a rise up of once strong man from the bottom to top. Watch Arthur grow in strength and form a team of his subordinates to crush the worlds and gain his former power back.
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This is the updated review about my novel so far, trying to reply to some questions and doubts I noticed recently about the novel. I will start the review by quoting the words of a renown worldwide editor that I personally respect, Daniel Wallace "Some of us writers, as a result, get confused about our goal. We try to write a novel that introduces readers to that universe that has begun shimmering in our mind's eye. But unless you plan to write a thousand page "epic," and you know how to make such a grand tome exciting to a reader, what happens instead is: You get confused and stuck because there is so much to convey. Your characters feel passive, like TOURISTS, because their real function in the narrative is to show up to new parts of this fictional world so that you can describe those locations to the reader. In contrast, it can be very therapeutic, and very effective, to instead distinguish between the novel's "universe" and its "story." And then to focus on the story. The novel's story might reveal only a tiny fraction of that fictional universe. Instead, the story focuses on a character trying to do something, to change, to figure something out. Through that fictional person's struggles, we let the reader imagine the fullness of the fictional universe we see." My novel is well planned, per my usual writing habits in writing any story. It's grand outline, main plots and subplots are already planned out. So, a thing or two might happen that would seem illogical, or things being mentioned now and not be spoken about for long time; these all are intentional, not plot holes, but it's the plot twists. The MC works not as a tourist, but a real adventurer, where he will focus on making himself stronger, recruit many followers, build an army, and make this army mighty. He seeks to change his current situation to better, and he won't stop at anything while doing that. He might seem kind at first, but if you read carefully, noticed the tiny points I scattered here and there, you will discover he never did anything to anyone outside the small area of his own personal benefit. He never went off to rescue anyone, or make a war for a girl; everything he did and will do will only be for his own benefit. As for the first chapters, you might think they are slow in progressing, but many, and I mean it, many plot pieces are scattered there, unseen yet to you, but everywhere you will find many secrets hidden well, and if you dig well and deep enough you will be able to spot it. Long review short, this isn't a story written on a whim, not a story written with conflicted decisions, but it's a well planned, well executed story where everything is in deep relation to the grand plot, interlinking together as the story progresses, and finally when time is ripe, you will be amazed by the plot. Enjoy reading, and I'm sure you will be satisfied.
recommend all to give this novel a try........ story is progressing good.. i hope mc is not got dense as story progress and please author make mc reprocrate females all that shows interest in him not some other cultivation novel that got dense nd stupid and forgot their love interest.. i hope you dont drop this novel later keep it update please
in less than 10 days the Mc went from being the weakest person in the village to being the strongest person in the region. the mc progression is to fast and his being given powerups after power ups with their being no real story.
This is an honest review! Grammer is bad basic spelling mistakes every where in every chapter author seriously needs a good spell checker program or a person to edit your stuff. Updates are stabilized so no complaints there. Story development has plot holes galor and feels like author changes his mind after saying one thing or it may just be because the wording is bad and i dont understand properly either way oh well. Character design is honestly pretty good i enjoy most characters but as for their way of thinking some of the one time onyk seeing guys or few time seeing guys just do stuff that dont add up but the main ones i like. World background is non existent just about it but he learns more as it goes on but i still feel there’s plenty missing that could be explained better.
Author san is here. I always loved Soul Land series, and I had this idea in mind for quite some time already. Finally I decided to write it down, hopefully y'all like and support it. I'm now writing many stories at the moment, many are contracted and going, so my time is tight. I'm writing this for fun, so I will give it a month of dedication, with daily update and so. If you supported it with enough stones to keep it in top ten in New ranking, then I will continue my daily writing and who knows, I might surprise you every now and then with Mass Release. :D:D:D:D:D
early chapters: mc gets a hot dragon girl and she goes to her ancestral home, all the more reason to defy the heavens. 200 chapters in: mc gets 2nd hot dragon girl.. and the first is irrelavent. early chapters: mc gets bear as pet and they have a nice cute friendship. 200 chapters in: bear hasnt been seen in ages. another pet hes gotten was sent to almost certain death bc it was weak. early chapters: mc has lots of advanced knowlege, but must adapt them to this world. makes it interesting. 200 chapters in: alchemy is no longer a problem bc magic couldron. ley lines are introduced and almost immediatly resolved. army formations are special, but future is looking bleak. early chapters:mc has a small bit reliable team that work together well. 200 chapters in: they all work as managers of his empire. pawns in his quest for power. tldr: give me one good reason to care about yet another power trip. ;-;
This Novel is, while Not bad, is by far not good. It has Plot-holes and it feels like the World, where MC now lives, is missing a Large Part of common Sense. MC shares his "Secrets" left and right, with no through of that one of them will betray him, and i talk about more than hundred People who easily can ran away and MC wont even notice with so many People. Not to mention that his "Secret" isnt very Special. At leasts i would think that People, who live surrounded by Forest, Plants and Animal know at least some of them, as they live directly around it and have almost nothing other than these things. Laters he meets a Snake, that he does not kill, but makes a Contract. Said Snake turns out to be a Dragon Woman from a mighty Clan, who Heals him when he almost dies and must leave, and MC is heartbroken as his Love of Life leaves, even thought he talkes with her 3 times max and knows her not 1 Month. So my Fazit of the Novel, while it is Readable and the Quality, or at least less plot holes, goes up is it not Novel for me. It is a Novel for these who have really nothing to read and are ok with anything.
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If you're a fan for the cultivation trope of story, this is for you. The story follows the protagonist who was an acclaimed mastermind who found a way to defy the heavens, resulting in his demise. Just prior to his untimely demise, he managed to procure a solution and transmigrated into a different body but with an overall negative affinity to magic. From the first two chapters alone, we can easily see Arthur being a great mastermind and observe how he plans to overturn his current life as Willy. A truly inspiring and invigorating tale. **: Dear author, I find your prowess in the language to be superb! However, there are still room for improvements. It did not affect the story all too much but there are possible nit-pickers out there who would possibly choose not to read your story due to grammar. I also found the first chapter a little long winded as there were certain scenes that felt repetitive. However, this was a great idea. I love transmigration stories and cultivation stories always bring about excitement, especially in those action scenes!
read up to chapters 50, there were some flaws here and there but nothing major and story had a lot of potential except main character thinking which to me does not make sense. he is weak yet expands aggressively by sharing his secrets with any random passerby. this is not an exaggeration, 3 people (absolute strangers) saw him fight in a forest, so they just walked to him and boom he shared his secrets with them and even asked them to invite any of their friends... that's too much for given that he is sharing EVERYTHING and he is weak (it would make sense to create an organization of he could control it or at least have some pyramid setup where not any random joe gets the same goods as the leaders)
I just started to read this book but I've all ready fell in love with it it's one of the best books I have read in a while the updating is is great and it has a great background
So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily. The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done. Try my novel #Rise of Evil Sword God tag;- R-18,harem,action,romance, Xianxia
Hello, some how the concept of this story are fresh for me yet not. I like most of it but i notice there alot of loopholes in story. The descriptive are rather lacking as most of it was fast forwarded. when introducing a concept seem foreign to mc but suddenly author made the mc knew far better approach.
Read till chapter 50. MC's supposed to be some wise old dude from his last world with alot of techniques and stuff. He doesn't want people to know his secrets, YET, he tells others that he meets about his secrets and valuable stuff that he has. Bruuh..
Review as of chap 50. The story is pretty good with well defined characters. The world however is pretty non existent so far as only a forest and a city is depicted (not very clearly). But the major problem for me is that MC is way too fking stupid. ( I would call him naive but stupid fits better as I'll tell u why). This MC is supposedly hundreds of year old being a genius cultivator in his past life. He frequently puts emphasis on not trusting strangers in their first meeting, acts cautious and what not. BUT BUTT what does he do when not one but 3 STRANGERS ask him about his secrets??? He laughs and spill his beans and the cherry on top promises to gift them as well without even bothering to know them or trying to find their real intentions just like that. all in all a good read with a wannabe mature and cautious MC who has no problem spilling his secrets to strangers
Very lovable novel... keep up the good work Looking forward in reading it more and more and even commenting on each chapter so you can see how it goes and where to adjust
I just started reading this novel, I got to chapter 132, the story is good, it's one of the good novels I'm reading. Sad is having little passage to release the chapters
I am amazed. Your story is so original. Your mind is phenomenal. The fact that you created such an awesome story. I can only imagine how your thought process is. I stan.
This genre is quite new for me but I loved your story. I'm definitely adding this to my collection. I recommend this book to all the readers. You are a skilled author. All the best.
I really like where the story is headed. Isekai stories are my favorite!!! Writing quality is good, and so are the characters. The story is promising! Can't wait to read more of it!
Wow! It’s finally over! For almost a year and five months I kept writing in this novel. It seems like a long time but I can feel like I started it yesterday! Thanks to everyone who ever read my novel. Thanks to anyone who wrote any comment, review, and even debated over my novel. And SPECIAL THANKS for anyone who read through all the entire novel and reached this point. Thanks, without your support all this time, I don’t know how I would have accomplished this feat. I faced a lot of hardships thanks to repeated covid attacks, but thanks to readers like you, I managed to survive. So thank you and I hope you like my novel. If you want, feel free to leave a review of what you think about the novel. I’d love to hear all your thoughts about my baby. As for my future projects, there will be two novels branching from this one. The first will be a continuation of Arthur’s journey in the ultimate realm waiting for him. I’ll publish this novel here, continuing after this chapter and will be marked all with Tales 2. As for the second novel, it will be a separate one. It will follow a new tale which will happen ten thousand years after the reform of the universe into the new three realms. This new novel will go by the name: Tales Of The Three Realms. Wait for it, I hope I can publish it in one month's time. So, this is it! I hope you enjoyed the journey so far. And now I deserve a little rest. I’ll resume Arthur’s adventure after taking one week to ten days break. I hope you all stay safe and have a good time. Ranmaro