/ Anime & Comics / Tales of Demons: Divine Level Login System
摘要
Chu Cheng was killed in a traffic accident and crossed over to the world of 'Tales of Demons' with a god level system. [This is still being written, so there may be some changes over time.]
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榜單 
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Writing Quality is a 3/5 not because the grammar is bad, but because of the fact that you wrote an English synopsis but have Portuguese chapters. Very misleading, I'd say. Translate your chapters via DeepL if you can't do it yourself. Stability of updates is a 3/5, which is more of a consideration than anything. Story Development is a 4/5 for now; just don't add Nie Li, he's not necessary in System fanfics like this. Character Design is a 3/5 as although he has yet to show inconsistencies and such, I barely know him and I don't what his ambitions are. World Background is a 3/5. Why? TDGverse setting is nothing special, so make things can create a more immersive world.
It’s written in another language but the synopsis and chapter names are in English