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Disclaimer: Most of the contents in this book doesn't belong to me but from the original author name NaranNarman, the author of the original Synthetic Survivor. The reason I made this book was create a better version of it, because some part of the story isn't good and doesn't make any sense, so I'll rewrite it then. While the original author seems retires and didn't complete the whole story, I might just gonna complete it for him. And also, in this book, the characters and the outcome of the story is similar, I added an extra twist to make the story very thrill. And I change the names from the orginal book cause I felt like it.
References: Out of Space, Science/Magic, Doom Eternal, Overlord, Gate, Minecraft, Monster Hunter, etc.
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A man woke with amnesia underneath the shattered remains of a once powerful human civilization. He remembered nothing, his past or the events that happened that caused the world to become as it was. He was no longer purely human, he woke to find himself as a nearly destroyed Android. But amid the radioactive dunes and lifeless expanse of the Earth, a lone machine network survived the disaster. After discovering that he controlled them, he set out on one goal: Rebuild. But how can he fully rebuild? For the Earth once had life but now was barren, not even bacteria survived.
But he was not alone, when he awoke, a voice rang in his head, who was it? It was his long friend, a friend from the past with unknown relationship. Although he does not remember her name, he still felt how important she was before even if he has lost all his humanity and memories, her name was Caitlyn. Follow her as she guides him for centuries after he awakes, the both of them will form the most powerful machine leaders who will ever walk in the face of the world.
Their story will start 1000 years into his rebuilding, he now controlled a vast network of machines around the planet Earth, all focused in the effort of rebuilding the world towards its former glory, there was only one thing missing, an essential attribute which differentiated Earth from all other known planets: Life.
But everything changed when a wormhole opened, a breach within the fabric of space and time, opening a pathway between Earth and a world of fantasy! Follow him as he and his Empire explores this new mystical world full of elves, goblins, orcs, dwarves, ogres, humans, kingdoms, Empires and magic! His goal of restoring life may be within his grasps.
But that does not mean there won’t be opposition. There will be battles, wars and calamities, millions will perish in the onslaught that will soon follow.
Especially, when he discovers that the new world held the secrets of the past. He will face Deities and powerful foes, will he prevail? New weapons he will smith and countries he shall wipe out.
Note: I'm fine with the Critism comments you will sent, because it helps me with my mistake on the story, and don't do it TOO much because I'm a bit emotional.
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Its a good story my only problem with it is that most of the chapters are in the pov of other characters i came here to read about an android making his mark on a new world instead like 70% of chapters are of other characters or constantly introducing new and somewhat inconsequential characters. It might be that this stops in the future but i could only manage around 40 chapters before it got to annoying to finish
It's a good idea but i find it so stupid to just kill humans who come out of the portal and try to invade like what does he want, and why. And you mentioned his purpose is to bring life , so dumb in my opinion and hypocrite
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Just the grammar from the synopsis gave me a low expectation for this ‘rewrite’ Just the grammar from the synopsis gave me a low expectation for this ‘rewrite’
Wow! I was a fan of the original and once I saw this, I had to click. It's honestly twice the quality of the original. As much as i wanted the author to continue theirs, it never happened. I don't think it will. Although the author swears they'll continue it (right on this page), 9 times out of 10 it'll never happen. The original was going in a weird direction and it wasn't too insane, but the concept was there. Thank you for making this book better! Good fantasy vs technology books are hard to come by, and this rewrite is even better!
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Love it, unlike the original, this one is better, not gonna offense NaranNarman here but this type of Sci fi vs Fantasy novel is now most favorite than Out of Space, Gate, and some others I don't remember the name though
Dude, i fricking love the original novel, thak you so MUCH for this fanfic. I hope that the author gives you permision! original author pls gib him/her permission ples
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Hello, author of the original here! I was surprised when I saw this and was honestly a bit hurt. However, I will allow it to continue for the sake of the fans who enjoyed the original. Also, as long as you do not, under any circumstances, monetize it. I am glad however, that people enjoyed my novel enough. Though I wish I could've done better, the original will be in an indefinite hiatus. It doesn't mean I won't be finishing it, alright? It will be, just not now. ps. I will also take this opportunity to promote my new novel: Legion of Eagles: Resurgence. It took me 3 years of learning and months of preparation, I hope this one can be enjoyed by you readers as well