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Wow! I was a fan of the original and once I saw this, I had to click. It's honestly twice the quality of the original. As much as i wanted the author to continue theirs, it never happened. I don't think it will. Although the author swears they'll continue it (right on this page), 9 times out of 10 it'll never happen. The original was going in a weird direction and it wasn't too insane, but the concept was there. Thank you for making this book better! Good fantasy vs technology books are hard to come by, and this rewrite is even better!
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Its a good story my only problem with it is that most of the chapters are in the pov of other characters i came here to read about an android making his mark on a new world instead like 70% of chapters are of other characters or constantly introducing new and somewhat inconsequential characters. It might be that this stops in the future but i could only manage around 40 chapters before it got to annoying to finish
Just the grammar from the synopsis gave me a low expectation for this ‘rewrite’ Just the grammar from the synopsis gave me a low expectation for this ‘rewrite’
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It's a good idea but i find it so stupid to just kill humans who come out of the portal and try to invade like what does he want, and why. And you mentioned his purpose is to bring life , so dumb in my opinion and hypocrite
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Love it, unlike the original, this one is better, not gonna offense NaranNarman here but this type of Sci fi vs Fantasy novel is now most favorite than Out of Space, Gate, and some others I don't remember the name though
Dude, i fricking love the original novel, thak you so MUCH for this fanfic. I hope that the author gives you permision! original author pls gib him/her permission ples
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Hello, author of the original here! I was surprised when I saw this and was honestly a bit hurt. However, I will allow it to continue for the sake of the fans who enjoyed the original. Also, as long as you do not, under any circumstances, monetize it. I am glad however, that people enjoyed my novel enough. Though I wish I could've done better, the original will be in an indefinite hiatus. It doesn't mean I won't be finishing it, alright? It will be, just not now. ps. I will also take this opportunity to promote my new novel: Legion of Eagles: Resurgence. It took me 3 years of learning and months of preparation, I hope this one can be enjoyed by you readers as well
Wow! I was a fan of the original and once I saw this, I had to click. It's honestly twice the quality of the original. As much as i wanted the author to continue theirs, it never happened. I don't think it will. Although the author swears they'll continue it (right on this page), 9 times out of 10 it'll never happen. The original was going in a weird direction and it wasn't too insane, but the concept was there. Thank you for making this book better! Good fantasy vs technology books are hard to come by, and this rewrite is even better!
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Its a good story my only problem with it is that most of the chapters are in the pov of other characters i came here to read about an android making his mark on a new world instead like 70% of chapters are of other characters or constantly introducing new and somewhat inconsequential characters. It might be that this stops in the future but i could only manage around 40 chapters before it got to annoying to finish
Just the grammar from the synopsis gave me a low expectation for this ‘rewrite’ Just the grammar from the synopsis gave me a low expectation for this ‘rewrite’
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It's a good idea but i find it so stupid to just kill humans who come out of the portal and try to invade like what does he want, and why. And you mentioned his purpose is to bring life , so dumb in my opinion and hypocrite
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Love it, unlike the original, this one is better, not gonna offense NaranNarman here but this type of Sci fi vs Fantasy novel is now most favorite than Out of Space, Gate, and some others I don't remember the name though
Dude, i fricking love the original novel, thak you so MUCH for this fanfic. I hope that the author gives you permision! original author pls gib him/her permission ples
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Hello, author of the original here! I was surprised when I saw this and was honestly a bit hurt. However, I will allow it to continue for the sake of the fans who enjoyed the original. Also, as long as you do not, under any circumstances, monetize it. I am glad however, that people enjoyed my novel enough. Though I wish I could've done better, the original will be in an indefinite hiatus. It doesn't mean I won't be finishing it, alright? It will be, just not now. ps. I will also take this opportunity to promote my new novel: Legion of Eagles: Resurgence. It took me 3 years of learning and months of preparation, I hope this one can be enjoyed by you readers as well