/ Anime & Comics / Sword art online: Bonds
摘要
The series takes place in the near future and focused on protagonist Toyo "Lord Grim" Kamizaki and his brother as they play through a death game virtual reality MMORPG world Aincrad-The floating castle.
Toyo is a live streamer, lazy and handsome pro-gamer with plenty of experience in this field also one of the best strategists and a cunning person, let's go along with him to know how he survived this death game.....
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The usually soft light of two computer monitors - now almost like a room light itself in the darkness of the room - caused the occupant to wince slightly. Having just woken up a few minutes ago, staying in the darkness of their room, He wasn't used to having a light shone directly in their face, no matter how dim it may seem. He often found themselves cursing for their stupidity, using an electronic device so soon after waking.
After giving his hazel eyes another rub and a few more seconds to adjust to the light, the occupant slid their mouse over their mouse pad with quick, precise movements that came from years of practice. A few clicks here and there, and the monitor displayed a stream and a stream chat next to it. In the box that showed what the webcam was seeing, was the face of the streamer, which happened to be the sole occupant of the room.______________________________________________
The cover is not mine so if you want me to remove it massage me at discord @Mark D Dragneel #7200
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If you dont read or think this is a bad novel. You must be completely out of your mind. This book is amazing. It is the best. It is AWESOME............
So, here's a review of the first 21 chapters of so. Well, it's another fanfic but the mc is not a person who knows the whole SAO novels or anime, nor does he is a pervert. Great attempt for a good fanfic.
Well, I never thought I would be reading something of a fanfiction in my life, but here we are. My only thing is, have you seen sword art online? There clearly isn't any blood at all, and they can also adjust the pain so it doesn't hurt nearly as bad as you're making it out too be. Just food for thought. Otherwise, I'm excited to see what you do with this world.
Character is realistic and doesn't get into the world instantly becoming a different person but stays consistent, and the story goes into a side of SAO that I never knew I wanted to see. If you think this is slow or boring than you just don't know a good long consistent story when you see one that has actual character growth with good pay off in the end.
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As far as I've read, the book is almost perfect in a sense, apart frm a few grammatical errors, it has very expert like flow of writing and the story makes sense too... The characters are well designed and are multidimensional. Overall a good work and definitely recommendable
Loved it! Looking forward to more, can't wait. 😁😁😁 Keep working hard, both in school, in any other important daily activities, and on this story. 😜🙂
No no no no no no! please dont do this. Come on. At least conclude the story. I know there may be circumstances but don't let this just flop without a conclusion. You can go on break/hiatus/pause whatever you wanna call it for all eternity for all i care but....Don't just drop the series. To be honest I'd rather just have false hope that you'll come back to continue the story even if there's 100% chance you won't rather than see another long spread story get thrown in the dropped pile.
nice novel and good start...........though it looks fan-fic.......it has certain potential to become a nice story....writing quality is good....don't drop author-kun
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Liked the story. The writing style is better than most writers on WN. Even someone like me was able to understand the gaming environment. So, I think that other female readers should also give it a try. You are doing a good job, Author. It's interesting.
what is it about, a summary, those who are already up for grabs, I read several fanfics of this type, with harem without harem, they always leave it.
The most commendable review I can give to a fanfiction is that, "The author took the world of the original story and created his own story line". And in this case, it wasn't the know-the-storyline troupe or the follow-the-og-mc troupe and not innovate new stories. I like that it dug deeper to a normal person's, that is a gamer, view of the game.
not a review just asking if this is dead. i don't wanna read incomplete fanfics.
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I like that the mc doesn't know the whole SAO novels or anime. He is slowly building his power and personality. thanks.................................
If you dont read or think this is a bad novel. You must be completely out of your mind. This book is amazing. It is the best. It is AWESOME............
Hmmm Good, worthy read. Would recommend to anyone But there needs more chaps tsk I didn't fail to increase the line's length With every line i typed hehehehehehehehehe
The thing of sword art online is seen vividly at first chapters, then it went according to author's imagination which was quite good. A nice beginning with a good story pace, hope author could do at least a couple hundred chapters for this novel. Well the writing quality is first class, just needs a bit editing to push it to the levels of top edited chapters. All the best dear author, hope you could continue the same pace you are going with, as the story is interesting. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😆