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Martin became an orphan when he lost his family in a mysterious accident at a young age. Although he was orphaned, it did not affect him because of the mental problems he had. When he grows up to a certain age, he joined the world of crime and began to improve himself.within 10 years he became one of the most dangerous serial-killers known in the dark world. He also started killing people for money.
But he died of an explosion on his last mission. He also had a system to help him in this new world.
A soulless and emotionless serial killer from the old world had to give life in a fantastic world. But what he didn't know is that the powers that were possessed in this world would change itself.
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Writing quality is pretty disappointing. The premise is interesting and I believe that this novel certainly could be good. It’s just I can’t deal with the amount of mistakes and choppy sentence structure. I understand that your first language probably isn’t English and as such I’m still giving you a decent review. People obviously like your work so keep at it. :)
I really enjoy the idea of this book but I just couldn’t get over the grammar of it all. If that was fixed it’d be devouring this book. Top rating if fixed
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It would have been one of the good ones out there, but the writing quality is pretty much on a machine-translation level or even worse. You'd really have to keep your brain running in full capacity in order to make sense of some paragraphs, which makes this book headache-inducing.
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The entire novel itself isn't all that bad, it is just the grammar and spelling that gets me. Overlooking that, the novel isn't too bad at all.
I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author. With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.
This is a new story that Author of Artic The Law God , So I am here and I try to give five star review because I like the author writing style and creative quailities.So here I am. Thank you Thank you Thank you
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The novel was very good and i was hooked on it but i am disappointed in mc character transformation. He is a serial killer with no emotion towards anyone and now he has a bottom line. In the initial chapters he was cold blooded, calculative and will do anything as long as it benefits him and later his character is being changed into a typical beta mc. i was really happy to find this book initially but now it's just another disappointing webnovel.
I love the character. He is cunning, logical and perfectly reflects his past. This is an underappreciated work and i think that this should be continued. I do not understand why this was dropped.
My first story here , So far I can see this story have the potantial the be one of good stories here so I gave upvotes th asdasdasdasdasdasd
I normally never write reviews but well I guess for that story I need to do it. When I started reading this book at first it was a really bad experience cause the English wasn’t understandable at some points and u were forced to use ur brain to get the lines. I mean my English isn’t good as well cause it’s not my mother language/tongue but the author didn’t even made the he/she or his/her correct BUT the story overall is really really great. The author and the story has a lot of potential. The system is really well thought out. Of course not perfect cause for system novels it’s hard to memorize everything and u will made fails with numbers/math at some point especially if u just started with writing novels ... Overall the author is doing a really good job. I’m enjoying reading this book and want to read more and more (sadly I’m on the newest chapter). So guys give it a try and stop writing on every chapter that the English/grammar is terrible... nobody is perfect 👌🏻 u all know how hard it is to learn a other/new language.
I would like to start off this review by saying that webnovel needs more novels like this one. Dark ruthless evil main characters. I am very selective about these kind of books because most of the time the "evil mc" is a antihero at best and a secret good guy at worst. However this book does it right. The book has shapeshifters as the main power of the world. Mc has a system and can power up by killing people. World building is enough to understand the big picture. The only problem I have with this novel is that ever time a new person is introduced the author shows the whole status\what shapeshifter they are along with the str, agility,int etc.... this happens even when the person is killed in the same chapter as the status was listed. At this point I have read all the way until the premium and honestly I won't continue this book. I'm not going to spend money to unlock a chapter when that chapter is literally introducing characters to the story and listing every attribute they have...I don't care about the whole stats! A name and rank is enough.... Such as. Name:Thomas Rank:psudo-lord Wish this novel was better as I said before we need more evil mc novels....sad day
The story,plot,setting,characters they are phenomenal.. but the writing quality is very bad. Pronouns, sentence construction, articles, nouns, etc are all wrong. Reading this type of quality is killing my own English but due to the brilliant story and exciting plot I can’t leave this story. Fix your grammar and you will find more people interested in your work..
Classic book from the author of Artic The Law God - as I always said this man knows how to write the real unique books - Thank you asdasdasdadasdasdas
I love this story! MC is excellent and love the no hero complex and is evil but not villain, just out for himself. Writing quality definitely needs work. I’m confused half the time and have to reread sentences atleast twice since grammar is way off. But I really want to know if you’re still going to finish? I never see updates and have been waiting ages. I have reread multiple times but I want it finished atleast. Killing me with no ending and how slow is updating. Are you still working on this story?!
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I loved this webnovel.Its one of the best. Long story short the mc is evil and ruthless and cunning.The grammer and writing quality is a little bit poor but acceptable. I just want to know from the author that how long is the main story gonna be. I mean at least how big it how many chapters can we expect in the future!! thx author kun....
Writing quality is horrible so is the update stability but be it the story development , Character design , World background they are all pretty cool and story plot is pretty good and one of a kind . I really love the work hopefully it will get better soon ❤️
Hi , people author here , I read most of the comments and reviews on this book and I want to give a good news to you people , about ten days later , I and other native editor and a person who has experience in editing the books will going to edit the book from the start.So for now , thank you guys for all kind of comments and reviews , just know that book will not going to stay like this and it will be edited , thank you !