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摘要
Reincarnated as... see the title, anyway this is my second dragon ball fanfic, and there will not be a constant update, don't get your hopes up.
All the pictures I use is not mine, if you want me to take it down just comment.
English is my third language so, sorry for the mistakes and the punctuations.
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This fanatic was going good. Grammer can be improved, but it's readable. The problems are too many OC's inserted without any reason and the author also named so many OC's which is hard to remember. Author also mistakes the power levels that he wrote in the previous chapters and writes them differently in each chapter. There is no world background and no need for the OC's who were inserted in large numbers as they are not in any way useful in the story and just waste chapters showing their development only to be forgotten later.
The wishes where ok they werent anything crazy but werent the worst either character development is bland story is basically just normal dragonball with op character speeding it up so this story is not really bad but kinda boring
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novel i remember because it is the worst novel ever I read but you my bestfrend so I will give you 5
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nice story you have going here. Grammar could be better so that's 4 star................ ....................................................
This is an average fanfic at best. Why? Lazy writing, creating useless characters, no challenges because mc is op. If you want you can read, but don't expect much.
It's Believably bad, seeing how if you expected great or at the very least a decent story, then you are illusional.
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Its nice.. could update more and overall its very good🙌🏽...please continue and don't drop🙏🏽..........................................................😄😄
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Shameless review of mine since it's my work. Writing Quality - 3 Story Development - 2 Character Design - 3 Update Stability - 5 World Background - 3 That's my rating of my book, you can just read it for boredom and I assure you, you will be disappointed at my work.