摘要
In the realm of immortal cultivation, Lu Changsheng traversed as a peasant youth, overlooked by a celestial sect. Yet, endowed with the Multitude Progeny System, he could earn rewards by propagating his lineage, nurturing offspring.
Thus, Lu Changsheng began his journey by marrying into a cultivation family, embarking on a path of intrigue, networking, and fostering descendants to expand his family's cultivation legacy.
As the cycles of time passed and epochs changed, countless supreme beings in the realms of immortality, formidable figures in the demonic path, revered saints among the demon races, and peerless beauties rose and fell, fading into the river of years.
Only Changsheng's family endured, immutable through the ages, perpetually existing, towering atop the path of immortality, sharing longevity with the heavens and earth, radiating brilliance akin to the sun and moon.
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The story is pretty decent. No translation errors that should make the reading experience bad (this is coming from someone who knows Chinese). Unlike other stories, the translator might have put some work into editing the chapters because the formatting is good, sentences aren't cut up. Story Development, Character Design, and World Background is decent. Simply average. Update Stability is free points. If the story is good, it goes up, if bad it's one star. I'll see if I can find the raw and post it later.
It’s not a bad novel. The pace of this story is very slow if you consider the advance in time related to his abilities. Only some of his wives so far have been described by the looks, saying very beautiful is not getting 5 stars for character design. There hasn’t been anything about the world description outside of his home, landmass wise. The grammar is very good, the best part so far. All 3 rewards are dumb at his current level. Talisman making is Op but he has to level up his cultivation to use it to the max. Which he has very slow cultivation it’ll take a decade at least to get there maybe 100 years. Beauty refinement technique, useless. The talisman is powerful but is also requires higher cultivation, yes it can be used but at 10% power.
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I am a fan of cultivation novels in general and this novel is based on MCs life in the cultivation world with a system that rewards MC when he has children. i think this novel is decent and worth a read. I also find it better than most novels with similar settings. If anyone knows this novel's raw please share
It is a masterful blend of intrigue and cultivation. Lu Changsheng’s journey from overlooked youth to an immortal patriarch is both compelling and immersive. The novel's rich world-building and unique Multitude Progeny System create a fresh take on the genre. As Lu Changsheng navigates family dynamics and cultivates his legacy, the story weaves an epic saga of resilience and ambition. Fans of "The Patriarch is Taking Concubine Again" will find this novel equally captivating, with its engaging plot and well-developed characters. Highly recommended for lovers of immortal cultivation tales!
Overall, I like this story. Not fully 5/5 star because there are problem with sentence structures and name. Firstly, the sentence structure is somewhat separated due to line by line structure which is not a problem to other but to me, it is seems imcompleted due a whole sentence separated into different sentences. And secondly, the name has some problem on title and name structure. I saw some name like Lu daoist, Lu brother and other similar structures give me mind hemorrhoids. Please fix it into this format for english speaking audiences: title(daoist, elder, etc) then name.
Clan leader my strength equals to the clan is much better...This one it feels too superficial and the MC gets stronger with more wives, and children. But they also added a whole how some arent able to cultivate, and how having kids hurts cultivation , life essence etc...I mean MC is adding women left right everywhere becoming indifferent to feelings or emotions...I mean just feels like some animal who is just breeding kids constantly and its not so interesting at all and too repetitive. Plus MC is a little wimpy sometimes...
Am enjoying the story line so far, l would like more time to read since I find it interesting book.
Nice slice of life, slow grind to immortality. Not the book to read if you are expecting a ton of action, I’m at chapter 73 and I believe there has only been two fights. One where he was ambushed and saved before he even entered qi refining and one where robbers attack him. He’s just a man seeking to spread his lineage and grow stronger as a result. Slow snow ball build. I just wish the chapters were longer or more each day as the slow pace of the story is made slower by the amount released. Hardly any translation errors, I think there have only been a few pronoun mix ups.