/ Anime & Comics / Start From Naruto: Shino the Dominator
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After suddenly finding himself transmigrated into the Naruto world as Shino Aburame, a character often overlooked and ignored, a young man gains the power to dominate Zergs. With the help of his knowledge and expertise, he begins to use his buggy system to dominate the world … well, he will have to survive first in this dangerous ninja world.
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This fanfic is about Kiba telling how Shiro's insects are disgusting. He does this 3 times every chapter.
So the protagonist reincarnates and can use bugs, but not really. First of all the protagonist lacks any background and his personality is unexplained, he is supposedly intelligent but instead come across as childish and his emotions are exaggerated. He allows others like his friends to disrespect him constantly calling him "Bug man" and say that his bugs are ugly despite his clan's respect for bugs, but doesn't do or say anything. The interactions are awkward and the details and explanations are way to dragged out to the point of tedium, especially when the protagonist's thoughts are poorly written, repeated many times or fail to make any sense. And then his 'Zerg Domnitor system' is a mess, apparently he gains a bloodline from this system which should have been an ability to better control bugs, not a bloodline itself, and it would have made more sense to gain bloodlines and abilities from the bugs. His bugs can evolve but how is that possible when he still has the original bugs? He claims that six months is too little time even though he can evolve his bugs in mere hours, and there's no explanation as to whether the new bugs that are bred have their genes evolve or if their Chakra can increase. And how can bugs use his own biomass after he eats food? The system becomes even more confusing when he mentions that "parasitic insects can help convert organic matters into biomass, but the insects themselves don't have a biomass storage. The drone has its own biomass storage and can be used autonomously to harvest resources." Then it follows some weird Starcraft logic where everything revolves around a Zerg, and where he starts sacrificing bugs and biomass to create a drone bug, structures, and hatcheries, withoit clear explanation. Then his drone bug takes the route of "Once I revert to an egg, I must bury myself underground for three years. There my form matures" and starts digging in the middle of the village.
Dope story. Trash execution. Mc is a doormat. I’m not even sure if MC speaks a proper sentence the entire story. More annoying then anything really. Cool idea though.
I rarely did a review, but I had to for this one, such a good theme, a good character to be based on but author has to make the MC seem more insignificant than he was in the original serious type, so far MC has not been able to speak a complete sentence without being interrupted by someone or something surreal, as everyone complains about it but author ignores it.
waste of time the author had an idea that he executed terribly the personality of the protagonist is bland and stupid besides calling him a genius the system is very confusing and cannot be fully defined
Boring, tedious, no progress, no development... the author must find it funny how he writes the mc and their interactions, but it's not, not at all.it's so horrible that you just feel anger and frustration, I don't recommend this useless garbage to anyone, don't waste your time, just look at the comments.
giving you 5 stars for showing love to the bug man. Shino got done dirty in the series, he could've been so much better. keep em coming
Would be 5 times better without the instant "DOMINATIOOOON!" mentality. Classmates? How can they help my journey to ma dominance. Emotional feelings? Gosh why did I have to be Isekaid which such an impediment to power. Then dominance system this, dominance system that. I was cringing so d*mn hard when his goal was "Become the strongest shinobi he can be. No, become EVEN stronger and step outside of the shinobi system to be a true Dominatooooor!"...
After 50 chapters i can tell you that the mc still didnt finish a phrase and that 8/10 of a chapter became just some words to increase the word count.No point in reading this.....
Usually i dun rate novels when they are bad but i had to with this one. The author somehow managed to make the MC very very unlikeable, he seems to be off the charts beta male.
This story started strong but got tedious really fast it seems that the Mc is not trying to get stronger
this story has a lot of potential, i personally think shino could be pretty strong[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Pure and hard "Plot Armor", not recommended... The beginning is entertaining, but the plot slowly becomes bland and more and more "Plot Armor" appears, to the point of being repulsive...
Its a meandering mess of a story with hardly any interactions between characters, like 90% of the story is the mc talking to himself or just descriptions and repetitions of things happening or stuff we already know Getting explained again and again. He also doesnt change anything so its basically just the plot of naruto from another POV
it is a middle of the road novel. but then goes into a crawl. for the last 10 chapters not a single day has passed or plot based thing. instead it is replaced by commentary. 10 chapter of commentary back to back
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The story had a lot of potential, but I lost all interest when the MC actually became evil. Karin had literally fallen in love with him, and then he decides to kill her to give birth to a Queen for his herd. A Queen with a personality I don't even want to bother with. The 'comedy' is extremely annoying as well. He hasn't been allowed to speak a complete sentence to anyone yet, except for Karin, as she was the only to care enough about him to actually bother listening.
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It is a cool concept and I was enjoying the story but whenever the mc is about to speak he is interrupted, it was funny the first couple of times but 20 chapters in mc hasn't finished a single sentence to his teammates. The only person he has had a full conversation with is his father and that was like 3 or 4 lines. I would've kept reading but the constant interruptions of the mc just turned me off the story
You are making Shino start and look weak, the original Shino was one of the strongest among them then gradually everyone surpassed him