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Star Wars -Lucky For The Life

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作者: Rockeryord1

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Like any reincarnated person, he dies and goes to other universes, one of them being Star Wars, he discovers what will happen to him and enjoys the characters and the evolution of a character and the challenge of being in Star Wars with all its machinations.

It is my first novel, I hope you enjoy it and if you don't like how the story progresses, leave it, because I have already thought about how it will progress, don't be annoying#

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The beginning looks bad. As if "more garbage for the sake of a pile of garbage" is needed. And all this is called luck... There are problems in the beginning: With the delivery and presentation. The emphasis on quantity, not quality. The lack of price, which devalues ​​what is there. The hero who takes everything for granted.

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