/ Fantasy / Star Immortal
摘要
Wang Wei is Born in the world of cultivation from the earth with the crystallization of technology the AI chip.
Trying to cultivate immortality in a world where spiritual energy is declining and even heavenly spiritual roots can't possibly form the golden core.
Look how mc enjoys his journey and fulfilling his desires as he cultivates immortality.
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English is good. Even if it is not good, it's sufficient. This is my favorite genre, yet, I still stopped reading half way through . First, divide paragraphs. If it's this blocky on PC for me, I could imagine how unbearable it will look to mobile users. It's fine to leave two lines of gap between paragraphs. it looks alright. The story progression is good, keep at it, it will work out well.
not a bad read.. I like it 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
It's an interesting take on the transmigrator with an A.I. chip story, but the writing is very low quality and repetitive. The MC is portrayed as smart and calculating but the stories first plot twist is just dumb and makes no sense with how the story was headed. If this story gets edited, then I would recommend it but as it is this should be a pass.
not that good especially towards the end he becomes completely hateful and romance is thrash
This book is quite nice, as the mc is not too overpowered. There are some minor grammar issues, and the whole storyline feels kinda wacky. For example, the early chapters are about his family and then whoooosh and he just leaves them
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fake op mc waste of my time. wasn't exactly bad either hence the 3 stars so try it and see if its something you'll like. I just have zero patience for fake op mcs
It's really a great book. It's neither slow nor fast paced. Just perfect! Please, keep up the good writing, author! Your story is super addictive!!!
This is very promisimg cultivation novel. I'd say it's almost at the same level as Coiling dragon. only some editing needs to be done because of little mistakes. Synopsis says mc wants just simple farming life, which isn't true at all so that can be actually ignored. mc has no fixed goal at the beginning and his goals change based on how much he knows about the world. He's ruthless towards those that try to annoy him or harm him. he's little childish sometime but very few times. Something i can't understand from this novel that happens in other novels too but this magnifies it is that there are cultivators that are like 30-100 years old (especially in the tournament) and they still act as if they are in their teens and are very arrogant without any reasoning. only the leaders of empires and high ranking elders have brains. brains don't come with the authority but with experience and time so why everyone else is so stupid? I like the cultivation aspect of the novel but some things are very complicated, like mc has so many things in his body and different abilities that i will forget those and where they came from so it would be great to create an auxiliarity chapter to explain every skill he has since chapter 1 and where he got them from. update tbe list as he gains more abilities etc. Also as i'm at the current latest chapters when he broke through Core formation realm, mc isn't really using the AI anymore. I understand that as he gains Intelligence because of his high soul level and cultivation level he can calculate things as fast as the AI can but I still feel like the AI isn't useless and he isn't using it to it's full potential.
.................................................................................................................................................. Nice Fantasy Novel
The story is very impressive MC is not only have stable mind about the world and it's power system he also is not some stupid mc who get overconfident with their new power and future potential. MC also has use his past novel knowledge to gain understanding of his situation and make decision based o it. Author pace of developing the story and world background is very nice and enjoyment for readers it's easy to understand the story. MC development whether it's strength or mindset is very clearly shown in the story step by step without any unnaturalness and author clearly mention or depicted it in the story so readers could understand it. I wish author will not drop this novel and I'm supporting u wholeheartedly.
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Great beginning great story a great MC until now the story is really perfect The author did a great job the world buildings is very good and detailed And the Mc is ruthless enough The thing that bothers me a bit is the bloodline thing but I believe the the author will elaborate later on
Honestly this is an amazing story that combines the cautiousness of a decent cultivator MC while not being too overbearing outwardly. I like the focus on physical similar to way of the devil but for an orginial minus the odd spacing and basic grammer errors its worth 5, 4 is only because its not professional quality and can be a bit of a info dump at times.
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A very determined, somewhat ruthless main character that drives the story beautifully. The beginning is captivating and from that point on, it gets even better. Worth it to read every word.