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摘要
It's an idiot's dream come true, I'm Spider-Man.
So if life is a game, play it beautifully.
Spider-Man (1994), Marvel Comics, The Amazing Spider-Man / The New Adventures of Spider-Man, The New Spider-Man, The Amazing Spider-Man, The Amazing Spider-Man, The Amazing Spider-Man (crossover)
Love Interest: Peter Benjamin Parker (Spider-Man)/Mary-Jane Watson (MJ)/Felicia Sarah Hardy (Black Cat)
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4.42
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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meh, it was good while it lasted, the writing quality is above average, story development is mid, updating stability is really good, didn't get into much of the world background but there is Gwen, black cat aka Felicia, mj (the red head b#tchy one not zendeya), Cindy moon, miles morales and harry Osborne (the world is a mix au), apparently main heroins are balck cat and mj, which I personally don't like mj, the guy knows all the horrible AND I MEAN HORRIBLE stuff she has done to peter in comics, cartoons, movies, etc ... AND still likes her, so I can only conclude that this Peter Parker is a masochist.
The story overall is just fine but I can't get over how dialogue is written. - these marks are really troublesome to keep track of and I think " these would just fit better
Okay, this story has a major problems. The idea is good, but the execution was about meh. But the major problem I have is the dialogue. I can’t even understand any of it. It’s like you didn’t even try. “•” <- these exist for a reason, stop using —, it just makes it unbearable to read. Please try to fix this so people can actually understand and enjoy the dialogue.
Cool but nothing is new, felt no difference between the original and this one.
I have the the first 16 chapter and the novel is very promising no downside till now so 5 stars
the story is very interesting it is very interesting focusing the chapters not only on the main character but also on the secondary characters giving them some character development too the same goes for the antagonists and the creation of the world which is not insignificant the only thing that could lead to a bit of confusion are the flashbacks where the time period in which the flashback takes place should be put in more detail leaving aside that is really one of the best spiderman fictions on webnovel
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