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摘要
After being recruited by the concept of hell itself and given a list of people Jake had to kill in order to pay for his powers and rebirth. Jake said 'Fuck Worm' and instantly used his portal power to go to anime titty land.
Story and powers are derived from the nsfw lewd worm cyoa with all its DLC
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It's practically impossible to read. There are too many run-on sentences and a large underutilization of punctuation. I can read through stuff like machine translation just fine, but this had me within the first 2 chapters. My recommendation for the author is to find someone to proofread your work or just use grammar software.
for a novel with commissioned chapters this sure is trash....................................................................................................
The writing overall is pretty decent 👌. But for those like who find it a big turn-off to read this fic, I recommend you don't read it and that the author should give warning in his description. there is plenty of Yuri and ntr in the works and how can it even be said to be a harem when it's clearly polyamory? Some of his girls are into other girls and ask him to get other girls for them, while those new girls also like other girls and he helps them willingly to cuck himself...
So far I've enjoyed what I have read. Question though since the MC has Soul edge will he gain his own set of armor like the past/previous users of soul edge?
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Question for the author; is this the same story that goes by the name lewd worm cyoa on your patreon?
this is how you write a good non confusing world travel fanfic.... ps plz have them go to fairytail next it is truely wifu heaven
I getting good at reading knew things, but how bad is the original WORM world?
I have enjoyed what has been written so far (5 chapters) and hope that it keeps going well! I've enjoyed most of this authors works, so I have high hopes for this series!!!
is this dropped or something because it's almost a month since its been updated
the relationships are a bit shallow, and the update rate seems to be 1 time per month, but besides this, it's an excellent story.
Buena novela, me gusta el ritmo de la historia y como están llendo las cosas, y además que los limones están bien escritos y descritos, Dejaré que se acumulen los capítulos para seguir leyendo después
Keep up the good work and please keep this fic going because I haven't seen many CYOA's on WN.
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