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摘要
A soul land fanfic.
A kid awakens his spirit, which was never seen before. All that is known is that it allowed him to have innate full spirit power and that it's hot
MC will first join spirit hall and well, the story will be a bit dark so if you don't like it, don't try
I will tweak the world a bit, mainly introducing different spirit beasts.
release schedule: 5chap/week
Cover is not mine, found it on Google image
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This novel is my second one and it's honestly better than the first. ( At least it feels like it is ) There is not much to say other than asking you to give it a try (☞ ಠ_ಠ)☞
i gave 5 stars...cause that's what i do...BITE ME...im eccentric i do this or that because why not. WHO'S GONNA STOP ME?? 😁😜
0. I like it. 1. It's not rushed. 2. No cliche Mc. 3. Has a nice flow 4. Love the strong family concept and not a jealous. brother that will kill his twin. 5. ???
So far so good I like the take on the story from someone in the spirit hall. I hope the author doesn’t drop the story b/c I’m really enjoying so far and if any one likes Douluo Dalu might enjoy this story. So keep up the good work author
I can't remember the last time I saw a well-written douluo dalu fanfiction. It's a pretty entertaining read, thanks..................................
I got threatened into writing this review. He also threatened me to give him five stars on everything. I don't want to lose my onesie... author is big boolie...
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Only reason it ain't 5 star is because I'm angry that yozuka'$ practically dead otherwise keep writing and I'll give you a toonie if not a toonie then a toonie
I want more it is sooooooooooooooooooooo☺️☺️☺️😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 nice please update it more please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
This novel as far as ive read(12 chap's) is not for the people who want some lovely little story or some 18+ plus ****(hopefully). The world background is blury for now, so i can't give much credit for now. The development of the character is not bad i quite like it. And hoppefully the story goes a little bit less dark because you can't keep doing it after a short time it becomes old, very fast.
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So far I'm really enjoying this novel I hope the arthur doesn't drop this novel cause its one of my entertainment Jdhfnifjdndjdkndbdk***nndodknfkdkdbekwpdmndjdndjdnfheoendhdoeleniehdndodnfik
I like the story but it looks to me from the way your story going only a couple of conclusions for the family and 90% are dark as hell. Dark stories aren't bad but darker than black stories are not so good in my opinion. At least keep brothers together and sane no matter how the story turns out.
This is totally not a bribe... I am really doing this on my own... So don't even think of it as the author threatened me or something... Well I'll give a try... Early 5 stars coz I wanted to...