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purely garbage, the character is so controlled that he wants to vomit, he does not want to, he says that a loner is always with an irritating excuse to be around someone, in the next life he killed millions and in this life he thinks that somehow he will wash the blood from his hands helping the weak, the weak that in the next life he "mutulated" hypocritical ****, for me and just a child writing this story he made thousands suffer and if they do that to him, he to impose limits and be good and he doesn’t know that there are no limits and he who wants to be a good person no more, once evil, always evil. a copy of a copy of a story I’ve read, and purely junk don’t read.
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I can't give anymore since not your book. Theres a poem in every flower, a sonnet in every tree, a tale in every lifetime its just for you to see… theres a lyric in every brook as it rushes over rocks, theres an ode in every nuance, as loves wonder unlocks, theres rhythm in every sound, every beating of a heart, theres poetry in every union and every couple who are apart and just as there is wonder in every new life created there is sadness and regret, for the unsaid and unfeted just listen for the music that your ears cannot hear, just strain yourself for the melody thats so far and yet so near the wonder of the creator, the magic of the divine is there to feel, for all of us, to soon be yours and mine
This book write by draconichero21 on fanfiction.net and devianart. If you want read it all you can go to the original site which have 209 chapter already