/ Anime & Comics / Solo Levelling: Perception
摘要
World: - Solo leveling
Main heroine: - Sung Jinah
Harem: - No
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A guy died and was granted skills and some mission to get reborn in the world where resides his fictional love and so he jumped without hesitation.
He was trained to hone his skills and was left in the world of dungeons and monsters where death was as common as a daily sale. Yet, the boy found a way to live his leisurely life with his girl and see this world burn for all it could.
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A/N: - This is a chill story and I would upload as much time as I get. No promises.
There would be centric romance and would only turn harem if I get enough response. Skills would be cliche since I am not a true weeb but know my shit to write some decent fiction.
English isn't my first language so expect some mistakes and if you want to criticize, then please make it worth checking.
If I get enough responses, I would do a poll for harem members but no Cha Hae-In tho. Sung Jin Woo would die single that way.
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Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a fresh perspective on the world of Solo Leveling by focusing on Jinah, rather than her older sibling Jin-Woo. While the novel boasts well-written character interactions and good writing quality, it's held back by odd nerfs, slow plot development, and short chapters that leave you thinking, "That's it?" In the story, the protagonist gets to choose his world, and he picks Solo Leveling because he loves Jinah. He's granted three wishes with different restrictions, and wishes for Gojo Satoru's Six Eyes, Tatsuya Shiba's Regrowth, and Kurogane Ikki's Complete Material Martial Artist abilities. Set in Jinah's class in Seoul, the novel introduces the protagonist as a transfer student from Japan who wears a blindfold. Driven by his love for Jinah, his primary goal is to get along with her, rather than jumping into dungeons and fighting. One thing I like about this novel is the character interactions. The dialogue is smooth, and the characters stay true to their personalities, making their conversations enjoyable and genuine. The writing is pretty solid, with the author using third-person narration to show what the characters are thinking and feeling. However, there are issues. The nerfs to the protagonist's abilities are confusing and don't make sense. The focus on Jinah, while refreshing, may require more exploration of the protagonist's development. Additionally, the novel doesn't provide much world-building beyond the combat and situations, which could make it feel less immersive. Another concern is the pacing. The chapters are really short, often with just one main event, and the plot moves incredibly slowly. After 20 chapters, it feels like only a week has gone by in the story, which is frustrating. In conclusion, Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a new perspective on the world of Solo Leveling, enjoyable character interactions, and decent writing. However, the confusing nerfs, short chapters, and slow plot development prevent it from reaching its full potential. With more focus on the protagonist's development, improved pacing, and better world-building, this novel could become a much more enjoyable read.
Not many chapters but good story, I hope this story doesn't turn into a harem......................................................................................................................
Great premise, with SL fanfics being rare, I was excited. And the start was decent. But the author drops the ball hard on the romance part (which mind you is a big part of the story). By drop the ball hard, I mean France vs Italy World Cup Zidane level of hard. The MC is just a lying creep, he wants to woo the Romantic Interest but just stalks her and lies through his teeth ALL the TIME. And not white lies to protect her, or to hide his secrets etc, naah, just lies for the sake of lies. It's really hard to read without getting chills due to how creepy the mc comes off as. There's also his whole "nice guy" act, Reddit level "Nice Guy" too. Not my cup of tea.
Dropped it as of ch 11, couldn't like the creepy manipulative and compulsive-lying MC enough to keep reading. Almost every conversation with Jin-Ah is either a compulsive lie or a manipulation, it's hard to read the romance develop like this. Also as of ch 11 there is no explanation about his obsession with Jin-Ah and why she's his girl of choice. I might come back to check it out later at ch100+ and see whether or not the MC stays the same.
Only one chapter so far but it’s quite good in terms of quality I do ask that if possible to not make it a herem but it is your choice anyway keep up the great work👍🏾
Review from Chapter 19 My problem with the story is the story telling and how the romance feels very boring to read through. You get these short chapters of interactions between Jin-ah and Haru. Maybe the chemistry between Haru is more of a stalker who is forcing his perception onto Jin-ah and I don't know if that's love or something, but I don't like reading it. I won't say much about the story, but there are a few things I dislike. 1) Something to do with this excessive need to elaborate the way other people see Haru's eyes. I don't want to know about it each chapter just keep it simple. 2) This one is a personal preference but the entire interaction with Jin-woo something about it seems wrong. Haru comes off as too familiar with Jin-woo, but the story telling makes the entire interaction between the two very bland and lifeless to read. Apart from these things. The Author for now is consistent with the uploads which is a good thing for most readers, but I'm more interested in the quality of writing than uploads and the romance... questionable on so many levels, but that's a personal preference. I personally don't read romance stories on here, but if there is one thing I would like to know in a few chapters. 1) The story keeps me reading it. 2) The characters needs to be more than just talking to each-other. 3) I don't care about the plot or plot twists or massive build up. Just make me not want to stop reading. So far although this story is very popular here. I wouldn't read it from chapter 1 again, but thank you for the uploads I understand how hard it is to write chapters.
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Pls no harem I beg there’s already too much stories with harems so it will be refreshing to see a story without one
definitely not the best. but the future is promising. Especially the fact that mc says he loves a woman and writes that he can have a harem in the summary makes this unbearable. I'm going to read this, but I'll probably look and read it in 12 years. 80% of the books will either fall or be left unfinished. still worth a try.
The MC randomly gains new powers not correlating to the original wishes. The romance is very big in this story, however I can’t read any more after feeling like the MC is a manipulative stalker who for some odd reason is just as overpowered as some other people such as the Shadow monarch. Short version. Writing is pretty good, the MC creeps me out. Romance is horrible as the MC is a stalker. Some people will like this but, i will not be going on from here
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Second review: dropped. Any story development will be in 20 years. Better read another story. 1/5 for update and story development
The quality is decent with a few grammatical errors and typos but nothing major. The story starts out well but it soon gets disturbing, atleast for me. Mc is obsessive of the female lead and a compulsive liar with a tendency to stalk her. Author does not bother to explain or expand on the canon plot that much and mainly focuses on the romance and slice of life aspect, if you can even call it romance instead of pure deceit and manipulation. In short; premise was great but execution fell flat.
Honestly this five star review is not justified. I merely want to express my thoughts whilst as rewarding the author before reading this fanfic. NB: I have yet to read one chapter. I myself am a huge fan of SL (Both the Novel and the Manhwa and probably the Anime when it comes out). Not only that but I myself regard that person as my number one waifu, (you should know who she is after all she is the heroin). Not only that but I am a massive hater of harem, (I truly hope I don't offend those of the Harem Sect), and I am a huge supporter of the Non-Harem Sect. I have read the synopsis and I believe this would,could and hopefully should be a great fanfic. The only part of the synopsis that I found disturbing was the possible harem. (I hope this doesn't offend you Author). I myself was once a proud supporter of the Harem Sect but... something that I won't get into much detail about happened and I guess you could say I was traumatized. I write this to say that I plan to give this fanfic a chance and support it with all my daily power stones depending on if I find it good or not. All I ask is that when I start reading you would want me in advance if this becomes a harem fanfic before I catch up to the current chapter. I don't know whether or not you read this but if you do I would greatly appreciate a warning in advance lest an incident like before happen. I would like to apologize in advance if you find formal speech annoying but this is merely a side effect of my mtl days. I truly hope this review does not bother you much and I apologize if any part of it was disrespectful. I try my best to be kind when I can but I can't when annoyed. Anyways happy writing and have a good day. Fighting!
pretty good so far anyway No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem No Harem
Great Story[img=recommend][img=recommend] Great MC [img=recommend][img=recommend] Good Romance [img=recommend][img=recommend] Good Action [img=recommend] just a bit of grammatical mistakes which is common, a solid 4.8 stars
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i have had this story in my library for some time and i haven't started reading it. i will only start reading this if this is a no-harem fic. if it's going to be a no-harem fic, there is a 'no-harem' tag please put it on. I'll give 5 stars hoping for No-Harem
I shamelessly tapped on all 5 stars. No holding back there. Anyway, this is my first review of my fiction and I would like to first inform you that this fiction is a solo romance and not a harem. The story is slow paced and I am trying to add as many details as I could so if you like fast-paced stories, I am sorry man but this is not the place. Upload frequency is a little inconsistent but I am working on it so maybe you would see my fiction being refreshed on your homepage more often now. Alright then, that's that. If you have any queries you can comment down here, or ask me on my discord. Peace out.