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Yohan, a 13 year old boy who got pushed around by his class mates and abused by his parents, found himself in a rare meeting with truck-kun.
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Overall it looks pretty good............................ Try it................................................................ ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................No actual complaints, just comparing to others, few errors but then again too few to mention, world background is pretty good, little more detail would be nice but so far I am enjoying it. Thank you Author!!
My disappointment is immeasurable. 1. This author put a fucking english name on japanese family name. Can you all fucking writer just create a name that easy to roll on tongue? 2. And the MC is 13 Y. O when die. What **** did he have taste to get reincarnation? I don't even think he get wet dream yet. Stop fanboying. Don't put too many OP stuff that makes you can't balance the world power level.
Update every day off the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of
Ok, it’s not the best for three reasons the authors use of grammar could have been better, and second made his character have to much affinity’s making it more complicated than it should have been. Lastly he called naruto a cartoon as an otaku I’d like to say f*** ***, naruto was for one made by a Japanese man and is not comparable to cartoons made by Americans.
A reasinable 3 wishes?? Is having all the affinities reasonable?? Is havinv those every technique reasonable?? The OP chakra a reasonable?? Is that the description of REASONABLE??? this is a trash with this alone...its reasonable
I understand one of the problems on this novel are the wishes the main character requested. You might want to send in some details regarding how the wishes works so they don't get tricked by it into thinking its another MEGA OP MC. I like the character design and the world background. I won't give into much detail as it would be a spoiler for sure but I do suggest for everyone to read this novel first than judging it.
Really great, wish it would get updated though. Other than that though, I've really enjoyed the story and the characters. Really hope you continue to write this story.
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I am done with this book.. girls come popping around like berries in a garden. His every friend is a girl. His childhood friend is a girl. His sibling is a girl. He saves people who in all coincidences are girls of his age. He fights with an opponent who is slightly above their peers and puts up a good fight, is a girl. I understand that he is straight and all.. and u r taking the harem route.. but for logic and everything that is rational sake one person can't be surrounded by just girls their entire life, from birth to childhood.. u r too obsessed with girls that u lost ur logic somewhere in some forsaken land. And then there are a few potholes that I tried to ignore.. anyway...
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Loving this story! Bit of a slow pace but overall the quality is amongst the best Webnovel has to offer! If you enjoy Naruto then I highly recommend this novel!
Very nice'.....tottally one of my favorites' fanfic stories so far'loking forward to more chapters'keep going the good work'xDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDXdxDxDxDxD'!¡!¡!¡!
Need to be updated a little bit quicker but other than that I love this story already. It's really really really really really really really really good good good good good good good good good.
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gem hiding here really good story with quality writing ..................................................................................................................
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Where the chapters gurgurugrurgurgrurgurgruurgurr?!?!?!?!?! Also I like the mc keeping powers secret, would be best if he continues to do so and uses say only 1 element when he goes to school. Keep up the good work.
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It's one of the intriguing fanfic genre stories. The plot is brilliant, but the MCs lack of ambition must be addressed, If he idolizes Madara Uchiha he must be bold and must not shy away from attention.