/ Book&Literature / Shadow Slave: Necrosis
摘要
In a hospital a young man lay in a bed. He is at the end of his life. The machines supporting him are all removed and as his eyes close for the last time. A familiar event occurs.
[Aspirant. Welcome to the Nightmare Spell! Prepare for your first trial...]
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Это довольно хорошо, хотя у mc какая-то безумная удача...............................................................................................
Really decent concept and power for the MC but after 9 chapters his personality and some decisions he make are just awful. He meets a creature who takes care of him during his First Nightmare and he just becomes infantilized. He also doesn’t want to learn how to use a weapon and wants to become a “trap-layer.” Another thing is that he just gain over 100 memories for literally no reason. He even says that most of them are useless. He also got two echoes from 2/3 of the strong nightmare creatures he killed during his first nightmare. Which is just absurd due to how rare echoes are supposed to be. And lastly is that instead of going down the more interesting route of making the MC aspect ability about using rot and controlling it the author made him a necromancer. Overall neat concept but in my opinion really lacking in execution and could have been done better.