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摘要
Fanfiction of the webnovel "Shadow Slave" by "Guiltythree".
In the suffocating darkness of his Nightmares, a boy named Ragna finds himself standing on a sea of blood.
As Ragna unravels the truth about his Lineage and the forbidden powers stirring within him, he must chose between embracing the darkness or risk being lost to it entirely.
Follow him as he somehow survives the trials given to him by his fate.
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
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I like the concept I'd say add a picture to your book that will attract more readers a blank one doesn't, like i read 3 fanfics before i got to yours, and I only read yours because i was trying to get a feel of Shadow Slave fanfics, though to my suprise yours had way more than most do, and everything your doing seems solid while minus the 2 Divine Aspects but since the story is yours it's ok.
The novel is enjoyable, but what bothers me is that you made two side characters stronger than the main character. Oh man, you even made one of them capable of becoming infinitely stronger, and you gave her a sword that could be the strongest weapon in existence, and you left her with a part of the dream god, and you also didn’t give her any flaw that would weaken her. On the contrary, this flaw literally gave her a divine monster as a personal guard and assistant in archiving, and this is really very annoying.
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