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A teenager one day wakes up in a new world as the adopted son of Luminous Valentine. How will he do in a world filled with monsters, demon lords, and true dragons capable of destroying a whole country with just one attack?
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personally i think most of a fanfiction's fun comes from the author's ability to come up with a good idea to integrate into story and i personally liked this one a lot i have also read a lot of tensura fics and overall its always better when the main character starts before the cannon smh maybe its just me but fics like "reincarnated in tensura way too early" always seemed to hit it better than the rest and this fic is no exception either combining that with good writing with bare minimum grammar mistakes and all you get a very good fanfiction (a bit spoiler down ahead) whenever you see an author putting his mc in the actual timeline that chloe(chronoa) goes through you know the author has read the entire tensura LN and knows what he is doing like seriously why do all the authors insist on making their mc an anomaly in timeline?timeline is already complicated enough with chronoa there is no reason for the MC to make it even worse
after reading the title 'shadow monarch in tensura' all i can say is; this novel is pure disappointment. everything with the exception of the MC is kinda meh, and the mc himself is worst then meh, you couldn't have chosen a worse person than the mc to be the new shadow monarch.
if you like emotional mc who will care for any one just because they say you are there friend or family then you will like him ... he also has reason for that *childhood neglect and abuse*.... it's like watching a Moth go after light after not having in his whole life
It’s not bad but not amazing either? maybe my expectations were too high as I just left of reading one of the best fanfics I know but this is meh. Read the first chapters fast but I’ kinda dropping off as the story progresses. I hope it gets more interesting I’ll try to keep an eye on it
Sigh~It lacks something, something crucial, like greed, maturity, romance and other aspects.Let me be blunt here, the story is boring extremely boring, Mc behaves more and more inhumanly and it's hard to ignore he is a reincarnated person, especially 3 times for f..k sake. Having a slice-of-life concept without romance is outright hellish plain and uninteresting. THE MAIN THING IS WHY THE HEL* DID HE MAKE STUPID PRANKS LIKE A KID WITH SOMEONE YOU BARELY KNOW, the pranking concept is disgusting here, especially how he started calling Rimiru his mother or father, DISGUSTING...
Great fanfic, it is a good read, sure its a bit fast paced but its ending was well written heavily recommend you all to give this fic a read.
i don't know if you tried to make it cooler or something but the women knowing mc powers kinda killed my interest so dropping it. bye thx for atleast making a novel on tensura world.
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Very good story.The author had a very goood job introducing shadow monach powers in tensura system also not making the mc op from the start. I am waiting for more.
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Definitely ain't top tier. But since it's one of the few SL fanfics on this platform, I'll be leniant.
A great read that takes you to an interesting journey and hilarious scenes by the MC..👏👏👏
it was a fun read. It may not be a perfect story but it was a good story overall.
nah this is dissapointment... It's seems their is no logic behind the plot and author wrote whatever he want.. It starts with verry unrealistic sad story(you typical cliche human evil but very unrealistic) and mc is just mehhh.. other character's are also mehhh...
this is a fantastic story why don't you make him go to another universe plz don't end this fast because this fanfic has so much potential 💯💯💯❤️
The main character's excessive emotional dependency on others undermines their autonomy, inhibits personal growth, and perpetuates a cycle of unfulfillment. It's crucial to cultivate self-reliance and inner strength for a truly fulfilling journey of self-discovery. #EmotionalIndependenceMatters