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A man from modern day earth gets killed by Truck-sama and his soul transmigrates to another world. His soul merges with the second prince of the Fortis Kingdom. A summoning system appears to help him survive this dangerous new world.
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So far it’s very good I like the system and how it ranks things also I’m also quite tired of the stat blocks because it’s very tiring to remember and I love my self so simplistically, all in all 5 stars also if you dare make this MC a **** boy or horn dog I will find you and I will throw crumpled paper balls from the corner of your room at you.
2.6- Too many plot hole, some people are bad to make sure the MC stay good, otherwise how could he become king. Also the whole thing about someone born from a whore becoming the crown prince is one of the biggest bull**** i ever read. This is a western like kingdom with strong nobles, and the legitimate crown prince is thrown away for an official bastard. This can only lead to one thing,, a civil war, and not just the family of the queen but all the nobles of the kingdom. Do you want me to explain why ? Because if this happen it makes a precedent, which mean that from now on the king can decide to put a bastard as a crown prince taking the place of the legitimate prince. So in this case no noble whether from this kingdom or another will ever wed with the following kings. What's the use since they know they can't get nearer to the royal family or have someone with their blood as the next king. Who would take the risk ?? At this point they would rather wed each other, since they know they won't get cuckhold at least. So rather than such a situation this will be war to kill the king and make sure such a thing never happen. I'm not even talking about the retard father who say bull**** like "you will make a good kingg", shut the **** up for a minute, you only say that because of his talent, and because the author thing that a good king is a good person. That's hypocrite, i stop here.
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It's as if people have an obsession with enslaving innocent children. I swear it is always the psychopaths who manage to reincarnate. Moral of the story: Be a psychopath if you want a second chance with a hax op
Story without depth, inconsistent world with absurd power levels, there is absolutely no suspense the MC quickly summoned Souei who is able to literally destroy everything that exists in this world, everything is too much forced the author still finds reasons why the MC does not solve problems instantly when with Souei he is already able to achieve whatever he wants, in short, it sucks. The worst part is that the summons have clearly been brainwashed by the summoning system, in one of the chapters Souei says the MC is a better master than Rimuru! The real Souei would never have said or thought this, even if he had been forced by the system to obey the MC ... I find that too sad and pitiful.
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Let's see, first of all I come to say that it's not worth reading Now let's go to the rest of the analysis. . I'm in the chapter 127, Take this into account . WRITING: English is not my first language, I am Brazilian, I read through the translator to understand better and what I see is not bad, with nothing to complain about his writing. . UPDATE: The only good thing about this work is the daily posts but with the amount of words written, anyone could do it. . DEVELOPMENT: It started well and ruined everything in the process, the story boils down to a character full of himself doing bullshit around and everyone wagging their tail at him. I would like to say that the author got lost in the story but it doesn't seem to be that since he totally ignored all the tips that the readers gave until everyone gave up on him. . CHARACTER: It's just an idiot child doing what he does in his head, totally disregarding logic. . WORLD DEVELOPMENT: If I have already forgotten, it is being totally ignored for the benefit of the protagonist
A summon system never last that long. The longest summon system 1 know is about 40 chapter, so i hope that this book will be longer than that.
The whole fiction is bland, its superficial, I read enough to say it has no flavor, characters have no deep, there is nothing that makes me want to keep reading, chapters are short and skip a lot of dialogues or worldbuilding.
It's okay, nothing too exciting, just wish you resumed your Harry Potter fanfic, one of the best I read but waiting ages to continue it, stop delaying it
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the mc is simp the mc is a simp the mc is a simp, im here to remind you guys for those who doesn't like simp mc this isnt for you, simp alert simp alert THE MC IS A SIMP
the story for now is consistent without many holes. The author is to be congratulated in this regard. The main character is something strange and disproportionate, it is not bad but impossible for anyone to suspect a 10 year old child doing all this. The characters and locations are worked as needed, sometimes we miss something more or less but it doesn't get in the way But the good things end there, The chapters are extremely short and usually the good events hardly fit in them or simply appear to be shortened to fit. The author gets lost a lot in parallel subjects that don't add much to what we would like to see, why losing so many chapters in a secondary fight that won't make a difference and we'll forget in a few days? Focus on those of the MC who showed fighting once or twice and I got to know about it all of a sudden, there is no sense in him suddenly learning to fight monsters. I like the story, but due to the lack of focus on some points and the ridiculously short chapters I leave that note.
I'd like to say that this is getting better.......but yeah......him "power leveling" is destroying any chance at character development. Not to mention, there's absolutely no thrill in this, because of the presence of his servant. Make no mistake, yes he definitely should take advantage of the fact that he has strong servants..,....but a "god servant" isnt exactly a good thing for the plot.....i mean any further inexplicable plot is "practically" bland because there will be no intensities in the future fights whatsoever. another thing is, the thing thats OP is the servant and not really the caster himself......i mean look at the caster(mc).....exactly what has he himself achieved without the help of his servants.........where has he progressed in the years that passed by.......aside from the duchy(probably). I dont really see anything unique about this mc......he just....feels.....like a normie fanboy supporting his servants......
Dropped this novel first full of loopholes, like the Phoenix have unli TP that don't have mana or CD for the skill. Second the spy guy so OP that cultivator in that world can't match to it, how's the hell cultivator cutivate mana or Battle spirit can't match to that guy. Third is MC is so young that parents of him didn't curios like he possess of old expert or reincarnate of it.
Novel is pretty good, and an enjoyable read. However there are still some flaws Lemme explain Writing is good, no problem here +1 Updates are stable very good +1 The story is a bit of a mixed bag not gonna lie, the author seem a bit confused about what he has done and how to go from here. Because he has effectively made a slice of life novel. But seem like he didn't really set out to do so. It doesn't really have much of grim reality for something with a mature tag. Don't get me wrong it's not bad, just not really what I you would expect. I will come back to this later. Characters are not too bad. The side characters are honestly those I like the most currently. The Mc comes across as passive. In a boring way, not always but usually. He has some moments where he is more scheming which I really like. But as stated above it doesn't really fit very well into a slice of life novel. The world overall world has minimal description. But the current world around him descriptions aren't too bad. Some thoughts suggestions. Depending on what you want to do you can continue the slice of life which is kinda cute Ideas. The ever expanding world. The continent they live on is in reality just a tiny island compared to the rest of the world The great schemer who, pulls the strings of the world with his army of cloak and daggers Say **** it and invite some good old Warhammer Vermintide or chaos into the world I quite like the novel, but it's very eeh idealistic let's call it that. Best of luck Mr author
(Written in the Translator - Writing errors are highly likely) The work is good, but in the last 4 chapters released so far, it confirmed what I feared most. The Protagonist doesn't even have an iota of pride or anything like that. He's the fucking 'Future King', he has strong servants and many other things, but he lets a fucking Elf and a Dwarf talk to him arrogantly, as if he has to feel honored that they're working for him, seconds after he saved them from being sold at the auction as slaves (sexual and various other forms). This is simply unacceptable ... almost everyone who read it was complaining, and so far the author just ignored it and said nothing about it. It is really disappointing to see such an interesting work, but with such a ... bad author. (Just a simple message, delete it and I will return)
Most of the summons novels are dropped , so please do not disappoint me and drop it. I have my expectations of this word so make it. And do your thing don't give a **** about what others think, well you are doing great job. So thans for all your hard work.
I hate summoning system novel, they always drop their novel and I only see one that's still ongoing so far but this novel is great. The author had plan for this novel and would not drop this novel base on his history of past novel he wrote.