摘要
He was chased to the very ends of the earth by those he once protected.
Betrayed by his friends and the ones he cared about, he lost his wife and unborn child.
Ending it all by throwing himself into the abyss, he was reincarnated into a world with Cultivation, where every being seeks to be the strongest.
Love or hatred? Which is it that drives him in this new life? Will he ever be able to take revenge on the one who destroyed his previous life?
Find out how the fate of the universe lies in Damien's hands by following Damien Godwin on his thorny path of vengeance and his journey to see what lies beyond...
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Alright my third iteration lol, This novel is not the usual run of the mill cultivation novel you see out there. MC won't just blindly slaughter or save every dog and chickens he sees on the road lol. Pros - 1. A collected, mature(not beta) and playful MC who is not too cold that his face looks like a frozen block of ice without any expressions despite his tragic past. 2. Interesting and entertaining story and plot lines that would keep you guys on edge and want to read more. The plot won't be simply about leveling up and jumping to higher realms like other novels but there would be gripping, dramatic and heart wrenching events. 3. MC's girls won't be two dimensional nor would they be left behind and forgotten. They each play a important role in the story. The Romance has and will be well fleshed out unlike usual novels where MC simply chances upon a beauty and insta meet and have snu-snu. 4. The world building has been structured properly and the power levels explained(glossary also included). MC's powers are intriguing(Necromancy included oops spoiler) and not cliched. It would be fun for you guys to see how he is going to use them. 5. I think the writing quality is at least satisfactory that won't bore holes in one's brain. Till at most Chap 80, there might be elementary mistakes and small grammatical mistakes, but trust me I will edit it as soon as I get the time. First time writing so can't help it. Cons - 1. Please somehow hold on till chap 20 as I feel like I might have tried to convey the information in a poor way. Maybe some might not feel that way but for those who does, I can say that you won't regret if u read on after chap 40. 2. The story might seem like a slow start since I wanted to build up the world first and convey it to readers. Maybe this might not have been the best way but it does pick up pace from chap 50 onwards. Again this depends on one's perspective while some might feel the pace is fine. 3. I don't know if this is a con or what...but some might feel the mysteries are too annoying or something like that. But please be patient as they are revealed along with the plot and you guys won't regret reading further. Where's the fun if all the mysteries are shown to you all at the beginning of the story itself? ---- Finally, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my novel and reading it. Also, appreciate all the powerstones and support you guys are giving me :D P.S (Harem haters pls avoid this novel and don't post a review saying that you hate harem since I already mentioned it in the tags, ty)
WRITING QUALITY: -A commen phenomenon with Original Authors sadly is poor writing quality, however this guy is an execption. The use of punctuation, paragraphs of reasonable length meaning not too long or short, and overall a readable flow which is what we readers expect. Why shouldnt we if were investing our time into a story? A story that will take us on a rollar coaster of emotions. 5/5 STABILITY OF UPDATES: Since Ive binged this novel up to current chapter... I don;t have a full pciture to comment on. What I do appreciate though is a novel past 200 chapters still going strong. Several OAs ive been reading have fallen of the wagon out of knowhere sadly. Thankfully this guy is not one of them (fingers crossed) 5/5 STORY DEVELOPMENT: The Story mentions that there current world is just small part of a ever larger universe. This is to be assumed and people at this point shouldn't be suprised. Putting that aside we have enough story to understand the situation while leaving some mystery which I feel is necessary. Also the author has put a timetable out for the MC to reach a certain cultivation level so it wont be dragged on in ths same place. Enough Urgency to move everything forward 5/5 CHARACTER DESIGN: This is by far one of my favirote novels in this regard. Iv'e read enough old authors and new original authors to see well done characters. MC - Man who started off on the extreme side of benevolence only to get betrayed. So one can expect him to pendlum swing the other way, however he dosen't stay there long after his first 2 women heal some of his emotional wounds and give him some faith in humans again. With his companion Luna also forcing him to face some of his repeating traumatic patterns that do more harm then good to those around him and more importantly himself. Great stuff. 5/5 Harem Members - The 1st one has been shown to have a rough history while manging to keep her optimistic view on life in contrast to the MC (I know he was dealth a worse hands, but I still think this point has merit). Her power is strong enough to stick with the MC for the long run. Good Stuff. Dont need a weak lover in the cultivation world 2nd women while some may view her as too agreeable with the MC I like her overall. Growing up alone with no connection.. to finding the MC and not wanting to let go developing a possesive attitude border line Yandere.. to slowley understanding the way people interact all makes sense. Is it emotionally healthy? No, but how could it be given the world and her experiences. Others: Several potentail allies have been shown. Too early to say if they'll stick with the MC or not given the current plot. Still well thoughout charcters from the looks of it so far. WORLD BACKGROUND: This novel despite being over 250+ chapters in is still very mysterious. Multiple demensions if you zoom out to the max. While the current land mass may or may not be the only one. I wanted to give this a 4/5, however I understand its still too early to know such information so I'll give it a 5/5 in hopes clarity will happen soon. OVERALL: Worth the read. Truly. Cultviation stucture is easy to understand, charcters have depth and are develpoing. Story is progressing at a resonable pace. 5/5
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A pretty good novel if you ask me.[img=recommend][img=faceslap] As of the latest chapter(106). I really like the MC's character, he's pretty ruthless to his enemies and caring to those who are close to him. And if we're talking about romance(which I like the most), its written very well, no rush and has a proper buildup. The MC isn't dense 😎. The harem tag is still very far from action I think but the R-18 , I feel its very close? hmm author( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Btw this my first time writing a "proper" review . This novel is just so good that I think I'll have to resort using my other accounts just for the extra top up coin rewards 😏
I have only read 6 chapters so far, but I can already tell in time that this could possibly be a great novel. The writing quality is great (which is very surprising as a person who usually browses new novels) and honestly that's good enough for me to add it to my library. Hey author, hope you continue to develop this story and it becomes a banger.
Is this harem? I Know there is no harem tag, But a few of the reviews i have read seems to argue otherwise. Haren is not my cup of tea and i will appreciaTe an early warnIng
This entire story is amazing. The only issue is that I read so much that I end up with nothing to read. This is one of those books that I could read and then get upset that I read it all.
This is good so far... the plot is interesting and there are a lot of questions both from Damien old and new world. Seeing the tags, I think I know where this story going to be. Looking forward for it.
This story is about a MC that is betrayed by people he trust and protected before jumping off the cliff and being reincarnated (but feels more like a transmigration). The storyline is fairly solid and is generally enjoyable to read. I rated this a 3.8, primarily because of the annoying plot armor that saves the MC, time after time due his 'machonism' to take on more than he can handle or unwillingness to be looked down upon. The MC just never seems to learn from his mistakes and as of late, his wariness of being used and betrayed again seems to be gone, replaced by your typical headstrong hero who voluntarily becomes the kingdom's savior. The MC is a sword master, but as of ch 90 or so, he has been in life and death situations saved only by plot armor without even wielding a sword all because he wants to experience his other skills according the author's comment. The harem element also seems forced, such as the random cat girl that saves the MC just has he was about to be killed after being greedy for some spirit plant.
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The more chapters I read, I became more invested. I feel sorry for the male progonist - after everything he’d done for his old world 😭😭😭. I gave them all 5 because I feel you executed them well. There isn’t much else to say, I highly recommend the book!!! It captures your attention from the beginning, I’m impressed!
Original and very catchy cover page! The novel is well polished! The first thing I have noticed while reading your story, was the language. Good one! You don't struggle, like most of us, with tenses, style or grammar. The storyline is interesting, characters are expressive. Well done!
First of all, the novel is good and it was worth my time reading it. The grammars are ok I think, some mistakes here and there but it doesn't matter, at least I could convey what they meant
5 stars! This book has the potential, I love your writing quality so much, this being your first novel is already amazing! Please continue to write more, the story overall is intriguing, good job! keep up the good work, Author!
OMG, I will totally agree to what the rest of the reviewers have mentioned. I had goosebumps while reading the first chapter alone. One word Impeccable. The plot, the writing style everything seems to be a class apart. I bow to the author. Way to go.
i love this kind of novels, damn, for me is really hard to find this. It has al the tags i like and for the chapter i read the story is going well
Although right now Im only here for xp, I still recommend you guys to read this. This books is a bomb and the characters are also amazing and well written
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Currently read enough to write this review. The author did a great job in making the start enticing. Although the start is pretty slow, but hey what makes a great structure is its foundation.(pros and cons at the bottom if this is too long) I'll start with the MC. He had some dark sht past. In his past life he has been dubbed as a hero because he never killed anyone. Until he was betrayed by most of his friends whom he once protected (protected them from what? go and read the novel). He got reincarnated into a cultivation world as an adopted son of a patriarch. He also grew massive trust issue (well who wouldn't) and is now a lot more careful. If you have questions about his real family and if he cares for them, well they are not shown yet but hopefully soon(yes I am also excited for some familial fluff). The few characters that have appeared are well written. They are not flat. They are not those types who just sit on the side and cheer from what I've read. I can already see that this is not a one man army novel where the mc takes on the whole world alone. The harem is not rushed which is good. I can see that the author is planning on building a proper solid relationship with the potential harem member(s).That means r-18 will come a bit later(But Im sure author wont fail us when the time comes.). From what I said you can already guess that the romance in this novel is going to be great. The world building is amazingly done so far and has lots of potential. The mysteries being served to us are like a box full of treasures but you cant open it, it makes you want to dig into the authors brain and unveil them. I'll probably retract this review and write another one once more chapters are out. So to sum it up Pros: 1. The story is written well with its fair share of mysteries. 2. The harem is not being rushed 3. The world background is currently on its infancy but its got tons of potential 4. So far the characters that have shown up are well designed. For the development we'll have to see in the future Cons: 1. The slow start 2. Some lengthy explanations which could have been said with fewer words great novel and its worth giving a go