摘要
Zhao Yu transmigrated to the body of a down-and-out loose cultivator in the Canglong Mountain range of the Cultivation World, and discovered that he had awakened the ability to devour the Dao fruits, which allowed him to enhance his cultivation talent by consuming heavenly materials and earthly treasures, as well as elixirs.
Ultimately, through the power of devouring the path's fruit and his own efforts, he became a colossus in the world of immortals.
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-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
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I didn’t have much hope when I first read this, but was somewhat surprised that it’s was a decent read. Unfortunately, like many stories like it, the story devolves forms an interesting system story to a typical cliche cultivation novel that cycles the same storylines, has the system quietly disappear, and constant uninteresting battles that are spoiled by the chapter title. If he wanted to write a normal cultivation novel, he should have just did it. I hate when people write system based stories only to forget about them later
It's really good, especially if you are looking for some realistic development. It's not like one of those where MC will always go for adventure and somehow gain all the treasures thanks to plot armour. This MC is how I think I'd be if I could improve without taking unnecessary risks.
no logic no story no braincells on either the MC or the writer . This is the fastest hate review I have ever done on here. ch 9. If you like it good for you
It starts off semi interesting and unique, although 5 chapters in and you're already lost, but you continue to read because why not? Only for it slowly devolve into the exact same cookie cutter template as all the others. I guess it could be a good way to pass the time if you turn off your brain and just scroll.
The opening premise is interesting and lends itself to a more active mc. It seems he needs to actually go out and get the stuff to improve his power but it’s short lived. It quickly devolves into another cookie cutter cowardly mc who only knows how to make pills and use oversimplified overpowering techniques that just fall into their hands for no good reason.
the Mc has alot of potential but the writer has made him such a coward that it makes it so boring and hard to want to keep reading.
Review after completing the novel: So I read the raw, and it wasn’t that bad. It’s nothing great, but just okay. There is actually just one scenario that keeps repeating. Like the MC is (as always) from a low level area. He grows powerful and becomes the elder of a sect. Then grows way powerful that he is the strongest in the sect, becoming the de facto leader. Then someone offends and tries to kill him, but MC kills him instead (no suprises there). Then he kills his sect (90% of them die). Then repeats till he becomes the only sect in this area. Then goes to a higher level area, and joins another organisation, becomes the elder, becomes stronger than the leader, then leaves and establishes his original sect again. Then someone offends him, so he kills them, kills their sect, and establishes supremacy. He gets his old sect relocated. And repeats this process. And well you can’t have a cultivation novel without having the demons from the demon world invading. So ya, he packs up and leaves to another area. And guess what, the scenario repeats. A total of 4-5 times. To keep it intense and original than the previous frights, sometimes the villains gang up the MC. Like 3 on 1. To the point that once, it was 15 on 1. The MC still won though (no suprises again). And then guess what, he goes and kills their organisation. Until he becomes the overlord of this area, unites everyone, go back to his original demon infested area, kills and repels the demons, becomes one of the overlords. But how can he be “one of the” overlords. He should be “the only” overlord. So the others also get killed in the same manner. Then he ascends. The end. I guess if the story continued, then it wouldn’t be much different either way.💀
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