/ Fantasy / Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor
摘要
The great mystic universe, where the magic is part of everyday live of people. Where users of magic are considered elite and everybody dream to become a one and someday stand at the peak of the universe.
In a unknown village of the sealed continent of Zion lives a young kid.
In his first life he saved the universe and made made the great sacrifice.
In his second life he was a great king and the greatest evil who ruled over various realms.
In his third life he was a great sage respected and called master of all times.
Billions of years have passed and his existence has been long forgotten by the people.
As beings of his past tried to manipulate the present and reshaped his life path.
He stepped into the path of cultivation to take control over his destiny and to reach the heights of cultivation which he had never reached before and discover the secrets of his past and present.
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寫檢討I have been following the story when it only had fifty chapter and had seen the writing style of the author evolving as well as the character development. The starting part of the story is little rush but it's gets better with each character. It has been a great story and look forward to what is going to happen next in great magic world. Keep of the good work and release faster if possible.
The story has very nice kingdom building plots. Just the grammar makes it kind of unreadable. Still, I rate this novel 5 star cause i am used to machine translations and bad grammar cant do anything to me (*Evil Laughter*). Thank you very much author for this wonderful novel.
This is my first time writing story through my grammar and update are not stable but to the reader I expect to take some time and write a review, so that I can know you opinion So take some time and write a review Thanks you for reading and supporting.
This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
I noped out as I've seen a few too many LNs with bad editing. It honestly seems promising. With the corona virus epidemic, depression has been at an all time high. So bad editing now bothers me more so than it used to.
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I think i could absolutely enjoy your story but the grammar is really bad. I am sorry that i am saying it this direct, but maybe you have a friend or someone you know who can help. Otherwise try to find someone online who would help you and continue writing!
Great storyline and characters. The story is easy to understand and follow and I haven’t gotten bored of it in the slightest. Definitely recommend to friends or whoever is reading this.
I really liked the story, but it's impossible to read with all these grammar errors and poor editing. I feel it would be an easier fix than just having a bad story. I hope the author looks into getting either a better editor or get a programm checking the grammar
This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
Lost a lot of brain cells reading this, the world building is prettg nice, but after chap 21 I couldnt keep going with the other aspects. If you feel like it and has a lot of time to waste, you can read this, if not, well... You SHOULD get another one to invest your valuable time.
It is pretty good,the grammar isn't the best but I just try to over look that and when I do you story is pretty good,the characters are alright and the MC has a good personality. MC is a little stupid at times but that is bound to happen because he is just a kid. All and all not to bad of a story.
Honestly grammar is pretty bad, and could use better spacing, but overall it's pretty good. I would recommend this only if you're bored because it's kinda cliche tho.
I was drawn into the due how smooth everything was and how reasonable it was but after finding out that mc basically can't have any children just cause he awakened his bloodline it was kinda like a buzz plus I saw harem and r-18 In tags so I don't know if I want to continue or not cause honestly I don't see the point of being in a relationship with multiple girls if you can't have children it just seems to like that'll be boring like for all that he might as well put all his focus on getting stronger
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揭示劇透So confusing, I’ve read for 4 chapters already but I still didn’t see anything related to reincarnation. Can anyone explain this to me? Appreciates. I give 5 stars to boost the novel for now, but if no explanation received, I will reduce it. Keep up with the good work. See ya.
Yes yes yes!! This is story telling at its finest for sure 😊 . The build up in this story has you on edge at times also just how op can kai get. Legendary. Really hope for the sake of the joy I get from reading this story that it continues. Worthy of two power stones..reading marathon with only 6 hrs sleep in 3 days. Every waking hour reading this incredible work of genius. Would have awarded a 5 star 🌟 but some words are muddled eg. Take and talk but aside from that you got love this story . Cultivation, magic ancient ruins, OP Mc and sub party.