/ Fantasy / Rise of King Arthur
摘要
In a fantasy world where there is magic, martial arts, various fairy and demon race, where magical beasts roam, Our MC Arthur is getting bullied for his meek personality. When he turned 20, he was assassinated even though he is a noble. But he travels back in time and gets a system called the Lust King System.
So he starts his life again but this time he will do things differently....
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At Last I Found You In My World
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interesting idea for a system. I first was interested by reading the synopsis (I eman, what's a lust king system XD) but I have to say, I quite like the novel. The Mc makes me feel bad for him, and the system is quite well made. What I might suggest is adding some originality in the worldbuiling, like a new kind of race or smth
Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .
I really love this book, plz update I don't really like cliffhangers. btw you are the best writer and I love this book so keep on righting and don't mind some of the hateful comments you get.
By King Arthur, I was expecting some Arthurian setting but is another guy that happens to be called Arthur. At first, I thought would be unlikable, but didn't do anything that would botter me. The game system and the worldbuilding it's just great I need to say that I liked it very much, until what I read I enjoyed. A funny fantasy world with magic and enjoyable characters. Warning: A little smut in some chapters, If you don´t like it's warned.
This was a very funny story. I definitely like the protagonist's personality. All in all, the story was intriguing and I couldn't stop ready. Great job author!
An interesting view in a retelling of King Arthur. Though a little sarcasm and black comedy here and there, the initian is superb. A gratitude from me to you, this is actually quite comedic. Writing quality is as follows a good one. Volume, detail and also tenses are better and more responsive here. Stability of updates is decent as well, better than the other stories. Character design wise a little here and there of flaws but pretty good in my opinion. The MC is literally King Arthur but with a twist. A more child-like and rather silly personality than its original archetype. World background has a little bit of a problem but slowly gets to the point, though a little lagging behind. Pretty good effort and also a slow increase in detailling is nice. An honest opinion, keep up the good work Author!
From King Arthur to the KIng of Lust, this feels like a different take on the ancient, royal name. I found the flow pretty smooth for me, which is a good perk. Here are some of my issues though: 1. Grammar— I only showed corrections up to chapter 2, but I hope you see the missing commas, misspellings, and spacing issues I tried to correct. You seem to have trouble with run-on sentences, so I would recommend checking Grammarly or another grammar correcting app to see if it can assist you. 2. Flow— It was good, but it could improve more. My suggestion would be to combine 2 sentences into a compound sentence, as it gives for a smoother experience. Additionally, conjunctions are the way to go ! 3. Story development and Character— While the plot was novel, I found the character to not be to my liking. Maybe he will grow to be stronger later, but I would have enjoyed at least one redeeming quality about him. However, don’t get discouraged ! We all start from somewhere; only difference is the little things we do to improve, so I hope you enjoy your writing and take my advice with a grain of salt. After all, this is your story ! Keep up the good work, Author !
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The story flowed nicely. I know the author was not a native english speaker but he was doing extremely well despite his obstacles. I have seen few typos but the author can edit it! So far the story has a good detailed narration, story to tell, and a creative story. It was what was important so good luck author! You will improve later on as the time goes by and I know it! Have a good day and write more!
it is a great story. I must begin with congratulating you on the main character who is fun to read and manages to keep the book interesting. the writing style is detailed enough to build a great image in my head but not too much that it's boring.
It was enjoyable and Arthur has its unique charm (in a weird way.) The plot and the story are written in such a unique way (I think.) Keep up the great work!
Honestly, the plot seems interesting and the humor is pretty decent so far. Synopsis is quite interesting as well but I had a few issues. I'm not sure if you're a native English speaker so I don't want to mark you too hard for it but the grammar needs some improvement. Just the capitalizations, spacings and punctuations. Otherwise great start to the story and I'd say keep at it. I'll keep my eye out for this book in hopes you fix the minor problems. Adding to collections too. Keep at it author.
You've successfully created a different reality, btw interesting one! The plot is captivating and characters are expressive, also descriptions of the background are good, detailed. It looks from the beginning that you already have a concept for the story as ALL! WISH YOU ALL THE BEST!
Yeah,great book.great story. Unique protagonist. Overall a great book to read in your leisure. I recommend everyone read and support the author so he can post more chapter
I like the plot. It catches the eyes of a reader who's into fantasy. I like the writing style as well and all the descriptions of the background is well thought in the story. I'm quite curious by the main character of course and am rooting for him!
You have an interesting idea for your story! I would like to know what will happen to your main character in the future... ;) You're doing a good job in creating the world. I'll keep an eye on your story. Pay more attention to quaity of writing, to punctuation. The text is missing periods, commas, etc. All the best!
It is a curious and quite original story about a young man who wants to be coveted by all women. It is supported by a system that sticks to him after his death and gives him ways to achieve his goal. For those who like the harem and the R-18 it becomes entertaining and intriguing, wanting to know what will happen to the protagonist and how he will reach his goal.
So, I like your plot there! It is intriguing, the characters are entertaining too that makes it lively, which is a plus point. Overall, this story is a great one! Keep up the good work, Author!
Beautiful storyline, i look forward to reading more chapters from you. this will be fun and more fun. Keep writing so we can read more awsome chapters
Hello, author here. First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me. I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find. For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future. Have a nice day.