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nice chapter
I've been reading this story for quite sometime and I must say, I am intrigued by the plot. In fact, the story itself can catch a person's eye. All characters are well-described and different, each with an entertaining personality. Overall, I'll keep on reading and eagerly wait for new chapters!
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The synopsis isn't the only thing that is interesting in this story. The words you wrote in each chapter itself is what makes this book even more better! I find the character - the orphan boy - quite fascinating and it makes me more curious about everything surrounding the plot. Count me as a fan!
The synopsis made me curious to read the story and as soon as I read the first chapter, I knew this book is a good one. I like how you described the First chapter with the officers and the dead body. What entices me more is the way you wrote, describing the words in such a way that it captured my attention immediately! Overall, I am hooked :D
This story is so fascinating, I was purely intrigued but the plot itself, which was the reason i read this awesome book and trust me when i say, i don't regret it! The characters are interesting, with different personalities, making me curious about each one. Also the way you write is beyond amazing and inspiring! I look forward for the next chapter! :D
I LOVE THIS STORY! the plot is interesting and it shows soooo much potential! i like the characters and am intrigued about what challenge will be be brought in the future. I also love the way you wrote and described everything as it makes easier to make a reader to imagine :DD overall, count me as a fan!
By reading the plot i can easily tell how interesting this story is. I like the characters and how each part of the story is unique and makes one curious. I can tell that you put alot of effort in this and i see loads of potential. Also, the way you write is simply amazing! Overall, I love it!
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original The Shadow I live With
4.84
Joey Miller doesn't talk much. He lives in a dark town which carries dark secrets. But those secrets aren't compared to his own. No one knows that he lives with a shadow... Unable to bear his life, he flees after an incident that changes everything. Meanwhile, far in the fields lives Charlotte Quin, who loves to write. But she's hiding an illness from her family, knowing that they won't be able to treat it. Then, her simple and plain life in the farm takes a twist when she finds a run-away. Read how the two meet and struggle with the dangers ahead of them.50 Chs 607 收藏
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The Lost and The Gone
4.78 已完結
Seven months ago, five girls went out camping. The next day, four were found dead. One of those murdered girls was Lukas Wells' elder sister, Jesse. The only girl who survived, blames his sister, claiming that she saw Jesse kill the other girls. Everyone believes her. Everyone except Lukas. Now, He's determined to find out the truth, searching for the real killer, But what he doesn't know, that this killer already knows his every step, confusing him before he could even do anything. And all he's thinking now is that maybe he went too far, especially when he finds out that Skylar's younger sister knows more than he thinks. Cover ain't mine but you gotta admit it's good, right?35 Chs 67 收藏
- original
They Fall Apart
4.73 已完結
This isn't a book anymore. If you used to read it and are wondering - 'what the heck is going one' - then I suggest you read the author note I've written in here.1 Chs 3 收藏
- original
No Future
4.71 已完結
Harry's world is wrecked and empty after the outbreak of an unknown virus. Now, few years later, he's stuck inside this building which is filled with other kids to keep them from getting infected, separated from his father. All he wants is to escape and find him. But that's hard to do, especially since the building he's forced in is fully secured. Then, he meets two other teenagers, Nickie and Jaden, who know more than Harry ever thought anyone should. The three plan to escape together only to be kidnapped by a man on the very night they plan an escape. Soon Harry learns that the kidnapper used to be a friend of his father and he promises them a 'safe place' to live in. But things aren't as easy as Harry thinks as they four of them face this infected and dark world where survival is the only thing to worry about. Read, how Harry finds out the truth about himself and his father as well as the man who kidnapped them - Lyod - has a dark secret of his own.29 Chs 16 收藏
I'll be honest, it can get hard to keep up with all this writing. I totally know the stress of it lol. Take your time to finish the book. I'm sure a lot of readers will agree that they'll eagerly wait for it to continue into a beautiful ending. [img=recommend]
Memories Like a Dagger
Fantasy · SolAce