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This is a story about Arthur Smith, a very clever and successful businessman who finds himself in the body of a 7 year old dragonlord named Aegor Vaelyreos, 40 years before the doom of Valyria. Join Aegor on his journey to escape the doom and face the long night.
Note : This is my first time writting so please go easy one me. If you have any cool ideas which can help make it more interesting please let me know in the comments. Also in case I am having writers block I will let you guys know in advance and keep you update so I do not leave you hanging.
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so just curious but he starts 40 year before the doom and you say he gets ready for the long night... how long will this guy live since he's 40 yrs before the doom and the so called long night is like 250 yrs from the doom roughly so that will put around 290 years added on to his age already... just rough estimates but that's a lot of year.
Hope all goes well author and wish life was going better since you’ve introduced a concept not many have so far…good luck and Godspeed with whatever’s going on bud
anyone please take this story and write a satisfactory story, like make him reincarnate completely, with high magic talent, and make him head of the dragonlord family, and start building a haven in Sothoryos like about 10 years before the doom and make him reincarnate every 100 years or let him make a ritual that gives him a very long lifespan but needs sleep like a 100 years during the ritual with extracting energy from some source or 7 dragon eggs in a magic circle or something and make a very op entrance after targeryans conquer the 7 kingdoms but maintains a friendly but not much interaction relationship. Someone, please try this idea with your changes.
Very beautiful story with great storytelling and even greater potential. I only hope that it will be continued soon.
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The story isn't perfect, far from it, but it's so satisfying to read, I have a weakness for world building in the long term, as I said it's not perfect, there is some info missing in the info dump but really, I love it I hope the author will come up with a kind of contract like we hear about in HP of the binding kind, that the others have to sign each time they come to pledge their loyalty.at his house, so that when they betray him the consequences for this family are fatal. Anyway, I can't wait to read more.
I've been waiting for 2 months, why isn't there a sequel? 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧
really like this concept! can't wait to see how having more valyrians will change things. Hope you are doing well and update soon!
Thus far I have enjoyed the story and wait patiently for the next chapter, tho I think the author could do with a food beta reader to fix/look for Grammer errors antld the like
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I like the concept, the whole reincarnates every time he dies is novel and I must admit, pretty darn sick. Don’t drop it though, or I'll drop you off a cliff.
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I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]