摘要
The protagonist’s soul walks through the universe of a mortal and merges with the grandfather’s soul in “Rick and Morty” during the journey. He inherits his grandfather’s talent and knowledge and then survives, grows stronger, expands, and rages in the Marvel and DC universe
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The potential of your story is good, but there are a few areas where you can improve. Firstly, you should work on improving your writing style. Additionally, it's important to pay attention to grammar and make necessary corrections. One suggestion is to have others read your work and provide feedback so that you can better understand what you're writing. Overall, focusing on these areas will help enhance your writing.
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I don't know what to say I saw Rick and Morty and this guy is nothing like rick I mean helping batman and fighting villains I don't know maybe you want rick be a hero and it's okay he is not completely rick so he can be hero but fighting a villain with batman and he is not even ready completely and someone as smart as him should know throwing villains is useless and development is so slow I know he shouldn't be op but he in 50 chapter if he really gives his best try he should be able to take down at least half of the justice league otherwise it's a insult to rick in rick and Morty well this my thoughts maybe some of you like it
some bad points. the story sometimes becomes unnecessarily complicated. like him explaining the components of the Laser weapon. it just needs to be believable that he can make a laser gun out of a car. The grammar has to improve and it has to be more interesting. Chapter 1 is very good grammatically and is interesting because it is not that complicated. Just remember that this is just my opinion. and this is more constructive criticism than anything else.
I've improved some starting chapters please read and give feedback on whether they are still readable or not if they are still bad then I'll try to improve them again just keep supporting and I'll try my best
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揭示劇透 It's now a solid 4.7. But if you improve your grammar it will be a 4.8👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍It is also to improve the protagonist's charm. Make it stylish.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Pretty interesting to see fuse DC and Marvel fanfic that actually good and on top of that the mc have the iq,soul and somewhat body of Rick from Rick and Morty fused with him so this gonna be hella fun😊 and I jus know it. Also very good story so far
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Is it mtl ? The writing style and word choices are extremely Chinese. First 4 chapters were good. But then mtl started showing. And some with Rick's intelligent & not drugged to gills being so blaze about his security is... idk.
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overall I like this fic. but is the Mc still his age or was he forced to age with the merge of ricks soul? so is he still young or now old?
I give it 5 stars because it doesn't deserve to have 3.59 stars at least it should have 4 stars
Unless they've gone back and fixed it people are being over dramatic about the grammar. It's fine. I enjoyed the story. It's at least worth a try imo.
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This is fun. I like all the science talk and how while a bit inflate most of it is true. Also the character is fun. My biggest problem is just a problem that most translations have which is that you can tell its a translation with how the english is being used. I wouldn't even call that a problem at all. Good luck author.