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摘要
story will be resumed by my friend by Perishable Heaven later this year (2024).
The story was originally his for a series he wanted to write called Ascension of Authority, but he had scrapped it do to the complexities of Zodiac's Story.
I asked and he said I could have the concept; I had to stop writing do to life issues and am now reluctant to continue it.
Now that he has started writing for the first time I *Cough Cough* am giving him back his scrapped story. he said "Surrrre, I guess i can write the story although it won't be part of the Ascension of Authority."
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9評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
So far seems pretty good would like regular updates I recommend this it’s done well 123456778901234567890123456890🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I say what a good show 👏 👌 😌 this was truly the first time that ever came up.😃🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Really It’s an amazing story, the only thing I genuinely hate is the update rate. Along with this I’m in love with the backstory! More people need to make similar backgrounds but yeah over all it’s 3.5 for rating 😊
author I see you are gonna make a custom race so I think you should make mc be a Lich like creature because lord of undead its to fitting and will the mc be a antagonist or a npc like Han Xiao who gives op missions and make their own faction
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
As for the first one on the first floor of our site I thinking about you and your work on the first place and how you are doing and what a great idea you have
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This story is very unique, similar to the legendary mechanic which is also good because it’s different. The only problem would only be the erratic releases.