摘要
How can you end up in India, be totally out of your depth, and yet have a party of school students to look after?
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寫檢討
Into the second chapter, venturing out into the streets of Delhi. I capture the other-worldliness of the place (or at least the contrast for me). The big adventures are yet to come!
This story has been with me for nearly seven years. There have been many rewrites, but now I think that it is ready for the world. I hope you laugh, cringe and have a sense of wonderment about India ~ and how someone so unsuitable ended up there... (And having to look after a group of students more streetwise than our central character)
This had me hooked from the beginning. The quality of the writing was excellent; I felt as if I was experiencing the trip myself. I can't wait to read the next chapter as I suspect there is so much more to come.
A great story by an astonishing, talented writer. Well written with a good structure, I would definitely recommend to any readers interested in travelling and adventure. It left me on the edge of my seat! Cannot wait to read more.