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Elves, Orcs, Goblins, Dragons… and an advanced autonomous weapon platform. In a world of magic and primitive weapons, ancient evils and demon lords, the balance of power is shattered when a weapon, straight out of science fiction, asks the immortal question: Arrow vs 210mm railgun shell, which would win?
Out now on Amazon. Check out the updated and revised version: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08CRZ22LY
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Honestly, story plummets after killing the goddess. You ruin it by making sommus human! Wtf man. It was really fun when hes a machine, thinking like a machine.
So much bullsh*t, I can't take it anymore. Firstly the mc gets turned into a f*cking human, which is against the point of the story being a machine transported to a fantasy world. Next, the mc gets nerfed by a f*cking big margin, from being able to kill a God with just one shot of his railgun, to being f*cking wrecked by this adventurer party that was prowling around the earlier levels of a f*cking newbie dungeon. After that, mc's personality seems to change from becoming someone who would annihilate an army of ten thousand in the blink of an eye, to some dude who acts like a typical villian, explaining all his bullsh*t plans before having to try to kill his enemy just because him speaking gave them a chance. This is just f*cking retarded.
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Everyday, I go through the new novel rankings to see if there are some hidden 'gems' and I don't regret the time I wasted as I found this masterpiece! Keep up the excellent work for I shall put this in my library!😀
Read the first page and went to read the second but it wouldn’t load so I removed from library and added it back again but now all the pages are gone no matter how many times I try to refresh... anyone have advice on how to fix this?
It's a great story. The way the system gives detailed information, and the desperate fight of the MC not to be erased from it's consciousness, the way the fight scenes are written masterfully and with almost no errors. The world building is a little slim, and I don't quite understand why Sommus built a fortress, but overall this is beautiful work. I keep coming back to read chapter after chapter. Thank you for this
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I like these recantation of Mc in machines or spaceship and stuff only read the first chapter but it’s already thrilling!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍😤😤😤😭😭👍👍👍!!!!
This novel is amazing, I hope this novel would continue and the author would not abandon this novel or else I would go rampage for it. FOR THE ALMIGHTY SOMNUS (MACHINE GOD) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well nice work there buddy...we want more chapter ya hear!...hehehehhe...doing that aside though this is a refreshing adventure in a fantasy genre..kudos
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Kinda sad how the story becomes so boring and "human" later on. I miss the original, edgy, no-sense calculating machine authority it once had. If I were you, I would just divide this story, one where YOU would do whatever you want and the second one is what WE, the readers would want. Hope you read this and not just "reject" my claims.
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I like these recantation of Mc in machines or spaceship and stuff only read the first chapter but it’s already thrilling!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍😤😤😤😭😭👍👍👍!!!!
Loving this novel so far. Was worried there wasn’t going to be any room for the character to grow since he already killed a god but now I’m pleasantly surprised. Waiting to see how this story progresses.
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Story is awesome busome holes from there to there Quality is freaking awesome (grammar and spelling) Length pretty good (time killer) Thrills Panic Hope ( all other elements an epic story contains) Update Stabilty ( not-so-a-okay ) bearable Twist plot plot twist twist twist is cool with some time travelling and whatnot 5* for being non human 5* for being cold and heartless 5* for being decisive 5* for being not an idiot 5* for being not a pervert who wants harem 5* + 10* x 500*=Inifinity for being freaking hyped
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A great and refreshing story. MC is so good because he is not thinking with his d*ck. keep it up author i hope that you will finish this story.
Everyday, I go through the new novel rankings to see if there are some hidden 'gems' and I don't regret the time I wasted as I found this masterpiece! Keep up the excellent work for I shall put this in my library!😀
Everyday, I go through the new novel rankings to see if there are some hidden 'gems' and I don't regret the time I wasted as I found this masterpiece! Keep up the excellent work for I shall put this in my library!😀
Full decked God killing robot in a fantasy world. Enough said. And then plot twist it became a he. You thought it would deminish the story quality but it just ramped up to a whole new level with time paradoxes and gods. If i would describe his character dev when he put on his meat suit it would be like the movie UPGRADE 2018.
揭示劇透 Everyday, I go through the new novel rankings to see if there are some hidden 'gems' and I don't regret the time I wasted as I found this masterpiece! Keep up the excellent work for I shall put this in my library!😀
Getting quite interesting but I miss the first form of the machine god mostly because he kills gods with his original body instead of heralds but still really good novel.
The rewrite is called "Autonomous Machine Arsenal: An Evil Machine's War Record". It currently deals with a hard sci fi theme, but there will be a fantasy spin-off after it is done. (It is not very long, in fact, it is almost finished already. Maybe 50% done.) I am only posting it to Royalroad at the moment, and I aim to write quite a bit and hopefully finish it within a week or two. I am sorry for the inconvenience this has caused. I took down the chapters I wrote already because I did not want to mislead new readers into false expectations of what the rewrite is about. It is not fantasy, but rather a serious take on hard sci fi. Once that is done, I will return to the Reincarnation story, and post it right here, from the beginning. You can find the sci fi rewrite here: https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/22754/autonomous-machine-arsenal-an-evil-machines-war