/ Anime & Comics / Reincarnated in RWBY as Weiss Schnee (Rewriting)
摘要
After watching Rwby V9 Ep8 spoilers on tiktok, Jess gets hooked on the show and starts watching it but what happens when she goes to sleep and wakes up as a certain someone with white hair.
(I don’t own Rwby it belongs to Rooster Teeth except for my OCs)
Will also be written on royalroad, scribblehub, and Wattpad.
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Started this story now with three chapters, so I don't know much, but the first few chapters hooked me and while usually I'm not one to judge a book by its cover, Weiss look so much with my Queen Esdeath in the picture that I had to make a try lol Maybe I'll review after a certain amount of updates.
Bro really made us think he was gonna start uploading more chapters. He had us all fooled.😂
While overall good I think it has some flaws. Before I start to dog on the author I wanna say that the grammer is good and so are the fights. It seems to have a direction it wants to go in as well. (I hope). I think the romance main lead is fine too. -(little bit of spoilers but not really)- But, her powerups don’t really sense to me. Like she says she developed a new healing glyph because Jess was a genius and stuided medical textbooks in her free time, but Weiss is also a genius in her own right. So I would assume that adding healing to her powers would be something she already tried and couldn’t do. It’s not like Jesses worlds tec was better because remnant is at the same tec level so they would have the same level of medical advasment. Also her semblance is passed down from dna, your telling me no one eles tried this? The barrier power makes more sense (although still far fetched) because she got the idea from an anime and it’s original. -spoilers below if you care- Taking over the company also entirely gets rid of the reason she is even going to becon in first place, now her reason for leaving her home are flimsy at best because her father no has power over her. Also getting the scar was kinda stupid too, like I can get being traumatize so she just freezes like a deer in headlights, but her aura just doesn’t do anything? It’s supposed protect you even when you don’t actually try to protect yourself. If she didn’t have aura she shouldn’t have her semblance ether.
