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IN THE PROCESS OF DELETION! DONT READ!
READ MY NOVEL, 'I ALONE AM THE HONOURED ONE' IN THE MEAN TIME
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-I don't own any characters except my OC and some of my 'inserted' characters.
-Handsome Mc
-Overpowered Mc
-Harem
-R-18
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My Discord link : https://discord.gg/vHmG6YxfTm
Character pics are in the discord and many more 'good' pics even NSF- ahem anyway join and lets have fun.
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Yeah. I am reviewing it again because it reached 130+ chapters. Honestly, I never thought I would reach this far. Anyway... The starting chapters like 20 to 30 chapters, are mostly rushed and written without a solid plan in my mind. Just for wish fulfillment. As I was translating another fanfic at the same time I can't really concentrate on the beginning chapters. So I stopped translating that and concentrated on this fanfic. There may be some grammatical and spelling mistakes in the starting chapters, but I improved myself and I think those are reduced in the latest chapters. And it's an Anti-TangSan novel. Give it a try... If you have any questions ask here, I will reply...
I love Overpowered MC and Duoluo Dalu, so this is a great fanfic already. The story already started great. And i live harem so please add all the main heroines😌👌 or zhu zhuqing and ning rongrong
Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? ?
It's a great ff that I've read countless time's, tbh don't have negative things to say about it apart from a scene in chapter 188 where there is a little yuri which sadly disappointed me since I thought there was zero of it. Sad I have to give it up it was a great read with the slice of life aspect added and purely that's the reason for 4☆ would of been 5 but you know why...it was great untill now thanks
Story is okay, enjoyable even. his powers are OP but at least they are cool. the origin is a unique one, well his wish is. The grammar isn't great but you can overlook that. Id say the only bad part is every girl in this universe would pick him and discard whoever they are with if he wanted them to. He's loved by all, men and women, even when he's 6 he makes old ladies hearts flutter. Very FBI warranted behavior lol. He does have specific girls who are soul mates and are in love with him on sight. No build up. no lead up. just goes from 1 to 100 instantly. I suspect all relationships and friendships will be the same with no actual character growth. if you can look past that, then you might find a fun story here.
Great novel, very comfortable to read and almost no infodump. MC OP and doesn't hide his strength and can maintain his dignity. I hope that in the future this novel will not have unnecessary drama and the MC will not be humble
I don't mind the MC being OP or it being easy to win some character affection cuz it's in soul land world and it's like that. But god this one is so forced every character is fawning over the MC for no reason and those character interactions oh god it's awful, can't even swallow it as comedy anymore.
a good novel and suitable to read in your spare time, sigh... it's a shame I had to drop it at chapter 200 , there was too much depressing drama and Mc turned into a simping which made me stop reading this novel 😔 [Google Translate]
I haven't read it yet(also as there is only one chapter) so don't know about anything ...giving 5stars for two reasons 1. name--first time I've ever seen a reincarnation in a fanfiction(there might be some books/fictions with similar reincarnation out there but since I haven't seen any yet so yeah) ... 2. I'm having great expectations with this fiction if Author is gonna make it in the world which he is translating Good Luck Author San 👍🏻
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Yeah, another op mc in douluo. But it's nice for me, nice harem fiction thank you for your work................................................................
this is a very fantastic story 👏 i love the mc 😍 byt now now that granmaster is behind the baar why don't you send him to another world btth would be best option to send him to though also there's not anyone who can oppose him now so yeah why don't you send him
A regular follower of the story and find it suit all its tags and it's genre as a wish fulfilment novel. Grammar is good and story is detailed. definitely will be followed until it ends.
I like it ................................................................................................... Yeah, that's it. I just like.
I really like the idea of reincarnating in their own ff. It is pretty unique since I have only ever seen a few of them. The idea is also executed very well. I don't have anything to complain about this ff.
I like this fanfic a lot. There are almost no spelling mistakes. The updating schedule is also properly followed as of now. I wish the author keeps on writing this ff.
Ahem...As it is tradition for Authors to give 5 star for their own stories. Here I am giving 5 star to my own fanfiction, lol. If you like Douluo Dalu fanfiction with op mc, you can read this. Give it a shot.