摘要
So this guys dies, gets reincarnated to MCU as Tony Stark
Well, he had a chat with god/random powerful guy before reincarnation so he got something.
First time writing so please be gentle. I'm ok with comments and suggestions as well as loophole/problems. Also please keep them short.
I'll Try once a week/maybe more. But can only promise once a month
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters(mostly) they are Marvel.Disney/ Whoever Owns them.
I was inspired by some fanfictions so you might see some similarities.
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Boring. His shadow clones is useless and mc is stupid and the most annoying is he is still 2 yrs old @.@.@@..@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@..@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.--.@.
This novel fucking sucks. The writing quality can be just summed up - 99% of the time you can't even understand the plot because the author loves to jump from thought to thought. Don't trust the reviews - 4.5 rating? wtf kinda bull**** is this? Is this a ****ty translation of a promising novel or an original ? I can't fucking tell, its that fucking bad.
I like your novel and how he is getting stronger but it is too slow like really slow 31 chapters in and he is still a kid this would not be a problem if you had more than 100 chapters but well if you can update faster and make more chapters it would get more readers and you don't really need to care about how op you make him well I like op characters you just need to make it interesting enough and not too fast-paced or slow-paced. You need to work a little bit at the structure of how your characters talk I am not a writer but I read a lot and a good novel does not need to have a name in front of the talking for the reader to know who is talking just a " . So I hope you update more and do not drop it like other writers.
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Terrible fanfic, character way to fucking young. Steve was intelligent enough to think for himself. More chapter info dumps than anything else
honestly I don’t know why they give such high marks? Almost half of the novel is still small. There is no logic at all. He revealed that he was reincarnated. He does unreal things, while others perceive this as completely normal. Although this is MCU, the logic should still be
It is a really great fanfiction and just don't easily believe me. Read it for yourself.... And this is really good..... The story development is good. It could probably use more punctuations but considering the story and character development especially the mc, its quite worth it...
Its shold be call kid tony **** this ****y ... good premisse but the max for kid age is 5 chap after 40 i give up.......................................
Very nice fan-fiction. All the people who are saying that the MC is too young haven't read the novel carefully. Mc is 17-18 now. And author-san I request you to clearly mention his age in some upcoming chapter as people are confused. I love reading this, don't drop.
I just binge read this ...its just trash... I don't understand the good reviews even if they give me money, I wont rate it more than 1 - it starts with stupid mc - bad wish (which author takes to crazy lengths but still everyone is ok) - this just tarnish Tony's legacy - he is required by god to not change the story .. so he kept doing nothing for many thing, then he choose to fu*k story and go do stupid stuff - all mc cares about is beauties\women - stupid character development and no world building - 1D characters all over the place - bad dialog and worst grammars and spellings - indian things injection into story .... and a lot more, its just too much to tell, I've seen a lot in this, 100 times I said I'll leave this bad story but still continued just to not wrong this story and the people who rated this as good... I said maybe they've seen things I didn't see yet ... but it turned out they are just stupid and I've wasted my time
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I'm highly entertained with this fic and just when you think its losing some of its novelty, the travel to one of the best possible crossover worlds happens in a smooth as silk way that completely blows other crossovers between those two realities out of the water. Whilst the author does seem to be learning on the go, I'm way over a hundred chapters in, and I can tell you that he applies the lessons he learned whilst writing it well. I really REALLY look forwards to the next chapters in this fic.
This is one of the best fanfiction on MCU I've read. Hope that u continue it and finish it. Goodluck author,...........................................ñnnnnnnnnnnnnbb......... ..................
The author has shown great amounts of effort in combining the various histories of different facets of marvel verse, and has done a rather good job creating a coherent history of these parts combined. I especially liked one of the more recent bits concerning the MC hiring special ability people into his company. A possible dorection for the story is global monoply of all prodction sectors which includes medicine as well. Suggest beginning a company in that area soon. Overall great read and we by ch 77 still have not reached Iron Man 1. Impressive.
I was totally into this fic at first, but now i realize i was kinda deluding myself. This is such a wonderful idea but poorly executed. He’s doing crazy **** as a kid and no one is like wtf they’re all like okay tony i’ll do what you want. The writing is pretty poor with characters speaking their thoughts instead of you showing me what i need to see.
Yikes, unreadable !!........................................................................................................................
The quality is terrible it’s in this weird limbo betwixt a play and an decent novel. The characters especially at the beginning come off as stiff, all explaining their thoughts verbally. There is a saying I’m sure anyone who has taken an English class could tell you. SHOW DONT TELL! I want the story to show me not just say, “And then X, Y, Z happened!” I want them to show how X occurs through character observation, Y to be perhaps complained about, and Z to be implied.
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Overall it's nice i think. Just can you make him age more fast, it's rather disturbing sometimes. But keep up the good work and good luck.
I will say I hope you start this up again I used too look forward too reading this every week since it was a fun casual read you don't need a major in literature too write a good story
Have to be honest, was looking forward to the progression and everything, but I'm almost half way thru and he is still less than 5 years fucking old. Very disappointing.