/ Book&Literature / Reincarnated as Ling yun in ATG
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Photo in the cover isn’t mine. If it is yours and don't want it to be here, tell me and I will change it.
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Mc managed to reincarnate in ATG world as the young master of the most powerful sect in Blue Wind Empire. His main goal in this world is to conquer. He wants to be the ruler of the whole ATG verse.
On his way to the top, he will also get to marry a lot of beauties. And he will not hesitate to kill anyone who tries to get in the way of his goal.
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This is my first story, so please be kind if you find any loopholes and mistakes in the story specially in the first few chapters. Also, English isn’t my main language, so expect some grammatical mistakes.
Release schedule: 2 chapter/week(minimum)
Chapter length: 1200-1500 words/chapter
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What is author doing here... He destroyed all sects modernized the empire. WHY??? Remember that this is an ancient cultivation world so you should keep it such . This is not historical kingdoms genre where you will bring revolution by introducing modern things. And character development is utter bullsh#t.
Read chapter 13 and if you still give this novel more than 1star then heaven have mercy on your braindead existence.
The writing quality is ☠☠☠. The stability of updates is... *shrug* The story development... OP MC girls collect. Character design... can it be eaten? World background, can't really judge. There's nothing. It's ATG.
Bom, tem muitos aspectos interessantes na novel, porém é muito monótono e corrido com o enredo e tudo dá muito certo para o Protagonista. Além do mesmo ser um sociopata/pisicopata completo e ainda ir para o céu, muito desconfortável essa parte do enredo e ainda por cima não tem explicação o talento e abilidades dele, praticamente colocado lá para fazer o MC talentoso e legal. Acho que o maior pecado dessa história é a falta de profundidade e não conseguimos nos relacionar com o MC e as situações que ele passa. Resumindo é praticamente uma Fic de Realização de desejo esteriotipada e genérica, a história tem potencial mas a falta de experiência do autor cortou a maior parte disso. Espero que ele tenha ganhado experiência com isso e aguardo as próximas histórias. Só porque não estou dando uma boa crítica que a história esteja ruim! Só precisa de uma melhora no enredo e uma estrutura de escrita um pouco mais refinada.
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Where did the #ATG tag go? In all fan fiction, the tag is also missing. Keep writing!!! ....................................................
Very good development my brother. I am fans ATG fan and your work is fantastic. I hope you continue like this.
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