/ Anime & Comics / Reincarnate as Yukari Yakumo, the Gap Youkai
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After an unforeseen twist of fate, Akira, a mischievous prankster, finds herself reincarnated as the legendary Youkai of Boundaries, Yukari Yakumo.
Fully embracing her transformed identity, Akira harnesses her playful personality and newfound extraordinary abilities to engage in an outrageous series of pranks in a vibrant new world. (MC is ridiscuoly OP)
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Great story, i like this novelll!!! Nice background I like the MC pranking nature The writing method is quite good, the world development is quite thorough and the story is easy to understand
The idea is great but the way it's written is bad let me point out some of the problems 1) theirs no explanation about mc powers 2) the Mc personality did a 180 from an average girl as the author says to now a mischievous and playful personality 3) the author messed up with how he made the wish I think he wanted the mc to have Yukari powers and experience but when she was transmigrated the author kinda overrated the personality of the mc into that of yukaris 4) the Mc just reaches the dd world and right off goes messing around? It's off-putting like there is nothing original about the mc
With each new chapter, the story looks worse and worse. 1) Zero emotions, an empty hero - Died? Well, he died and died, who doesn't happen to? Zero emotions, zero reactions. Met God? Pfft. I see them every day, what's the big deal? The hero has no past, just an unnecessary dummy. 2) The smartest, most logical, most correct move on the part of the heroine. Which one? And the one when she tells everyone right and left that she can shift the boundaries. Hmm.... Okay. How did he (Vali) know she it shifts exactly these boundaries (see the fifth chapter). What prevents her from using the same time or space to increase the activation of the mechanism or redirect magic somewhere into the void? 3) Oh yes, another author who forgets that in English (and not only) there is such a thing as "PRONOUNS" in the language. Is it that hard to replace the name "Yukari" with "She"? Of course, it's easier to write her name ten times.
Mantap terun lanjutkan ceritanya, udah lama gak dapet cerita yang menarik kaya gini, semoga update nya lancar, sama jangan lupa elemen bertarung, interaksi sesama karakter, romance, world building nya di upgrade ke tingkat berikutnya 😁😁 overall mantap 😎😎
I love tohou but why is the mc female I know yukari female I mean why did you make mc female?
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Great FanFic to enjoy casual reading through WN. Gotta fill up 140 letters so this is just to extend my review till I can press the Post Button.
the fic is great so far, it has major potential...especially since i have not seen a single fic to incorporate this idea (being reincarnated as Yukari) its a bit annoying that it hasnt been updated in two months, but everyone has things they have to do, so i understand Overall, its a great fic, and i cant wait for the next chapter!
You know I haven't read any of the pages but I've already given 5 stars because yes THIS IS YUKARI YAKUMO. TOUHOUUUU.
I rarely give someone story a review, but I see a potential in this story. This is my suggestion for your story, like you can make a plot point like when Yukari got bored after finishing DxD world storyline, she can to go mutiverse in the future with her boundary manipulation ability. Well one more suggestion, you can use grammarly "use the free version" to check any grammatical errors in your story as long as you dont use the automatics function, you can see any error in your story for free. Keep up the good work author sama. That's all from me thank you.