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Reincarnated in the world of Naruto with the ability to perfectly master any ability seen, sigh the only side effect is a bad sense of direction
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overall good buy please download grammarly or something. ##++#+##+#+(#£((£(*(*(*(*(*(#(*(*(#(£(#8#828(£(£8£8£(2(£(£8£8282(£(£(£(£88£8£(£+_;3;38#(
The plot of the story is interesting and mc's ability is great, the grammar of the story should certainly be improved upon and also the wording of the sentence can also be improved because some words had other meaning but still used in the story and it makes it misleading when trying to understand the story. Still good tho
Story concept is very interesting and it feels like you can create a decent story out of instant mastery technique. BUT, the grammar is absolute trash. its worse than some of the translation fics that I read.
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The getting lost was funny, then he became superman... He pulled a kamehameha and I couldn't after that, I feel like if i read more I'll die of cringe. The fact he yelled kamehameha also played a part, but yeah I read alot of qidian novels so the grammar wasn't bad for me, character kind of becomes kage level in 4 chapters, fixes his getting lost in 3, and forced teuchi to do things so he can master them in 2. The grammar horrible, writing is 1, story development is 1 since he's basically ginna be hokage level in 10 chapters at most, character design is 2 since he makes me cringe enough to overlook any of the good parts. Mc barely knows how to get home much less the situation about the world, and he didn't even watch naruto so we get nothing. Reminder that this is only in the 4 chapters I could bear to read. stability is always a 3 unless the story is great enough
good until now , there are some wrong sentences here and there but all in all readable [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The MCxKushina thing is kinda disappointing, I'd rather support MCxTsunade since Tsunade was single throughout the original story. The grammar needs improvement since it's kind of bothering but still readable.
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you get up or 1 star rating because you never try to fix your grammar problem site in the first chapter of this book it was theirs in the first chapter some of the words didn't make sense download grammarly or get a tutor a teacher or something to teach you proper English or somebody else to edit your work cuz you will never be anything but a fanfic writer when your work is that bad with the grammar
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Everything is great except for some errors when it comes to grammar. These grammar issues could be easily fixed, please download Grammarly. It will point out writing mistakes.
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That's so great, feel more real that more Naruto fanfic the power's ultra broken but well author-san explain and use it so well that we just have to say ''ho's that so ok ok'' the romance is sweet and qualitative just love it. One drawback just to be honest (c12 now) u don't explains that much the geopolitic and plot in konoha and other country feel lack of world develop' due to the prota but well i will wait next chaps with great impatience !
The grammar its so bad that my eyes are bleeding...... . .. . . . . .. . . . . . ........................................................................................