Kirito_Link

Kirito_Link

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2020-04-06 加入 United States
徽章 5

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Kirito_Link
15 days ago
Commented

Just to be clear Beautiful has 100 bst solely invested in special attack, with 50% more that's 150. Which is the same as Rayquaza, Deoxys (normal form), Dialga, Palkia...

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Kirito_Link
15 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter and take care!

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Kirito_Link
20 days ago
Replied to Beginnerghost04

Here's another example for other cases: "Alright I will give you an autograph, there." The artist signed on his fans' books and handed it back.

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Kirito_Link
21 days ago
Commented

Also the title of the fanfiction is badly phrased. It should be 'Venom is my martial soul [...]' 'Venom martial soul in [...]'.

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Kirito_Link
21 days ago
Commented

When using a normal word after a sentence use 'the'. Here is an example: "Elves are fantasy creatures." Stated the child. "Maybe he is not really a bad guy after all..." The old man continued to wonder.

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Kirito_Link
27 days ago
Commented

So does the Sayan tail not exist???

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Kirito_Link
27 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter and also I advise you not to work on two books at the same time. Doing one is already quite exhausting, especially when you consider the fact that you can barely post one chapter of this per week, it destroys a lot the motivation to work.

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Kirito_Link
1 months ago
Commented

Again, thanks for the chapter