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摘要
Profession: Mercenary
CODENAME: 001
Mercenary 001 has the best track record on the battlefield, with a 99.9% mission success rate.
He died in action in his mission in Africa because of the atomic weapon used, and he didn't get any report about the missile. He understood it was a plot made by his superior, who feared his power.
He promised himself if he could get another chance, he would never bow to anyone.
He was a war orphan, so he never got to experience parental love, and he doesn't even have a single memory of his parents.
After his death, he got reincarnated in boruto as Uchiha Itachi's son.
He watched naruto if he had nothing to do on vacation, and it was his only source of enjoyment. He even helped him feel better and never give up.
It also played a huge part in helping to the top of his world in power.
BUT Itachi had son what?
It seems he died while his son had not been born yet.
If anything happens to Sasuke, he had it not to let the Uchiha clan be exterminated.
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the story is very forced [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
▪︎ Writing Quality.............☆☆☆○○ - Slightly difficult to read. needs a lot of fixing. ▪︎ Story Development......☆☆☆○○ - Boring and slow progress ▪︎ Character Design.........☆☆○○○ ▪︎ Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎ World Background.......☆☆☆☆○
the world development was vey bad. His mum was like an npc with no thoughts for herself and the he tries to kill sasuke for literally no reason, he couldve explained what he was doing and who he was and sasuke wouldve helped him and instead he decides to become the lord of the wave country which has barely been described so we dont know if it has become richer or not.
The story is strange to say the least. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
so far in chapter 6 a nice story to pass the time but, a little boring at the beginning that can be easily fixed in the future, the note 3.8 stayed with the vision until this chapter and i'm sure in the future i will put a better note with the development of the plot.
its an interesting idea but it’s completely forced and skips so much and is confusing.
Writing Quality 3/5 Stability Of Updates 4/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background (its fanfic so its hard to mees it up) 3/5 Its not bad story. If you wont to kill your time you can read it, but its wierd story. If you are going to read that, youll see what im talking about.
The idea was good. It really was. But the story seems to have been written in a hurry. At one point it seems like he is reincarnated and at another he doesn't remember things. The story had potential, but the author wanted to do too many things at once and ended up stumbling.
The Story is so good and the mc is op and characters is so good and i hope you contiune and be fast more than that in upload chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Great story, I like the aspect of Genjutsu that is not used much. My one problem with this would be how utterly easy it was for MC to learn FTG Jutsu. It should have taken him years, or at least more than a week. But great story author.
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
I hope mc will stay anti-hero and have a lover (kaguya)