/ Anime & Comics / Fictional Chat Group - All-girls Only Edition
摘要
One day, Eleonora Pendragon was suddenly added to a chat group with many girls that suffered from a chuuni disease. The people inside claimed each other to be 'Goddess', 'Assassin', 'Ice Queen', 'Vampire', etc. They would talk all day about dimension travel, exploring dungeon, or share their experience on techniques and skills.
However, after lurking inside the group for a while, she discovered that not all was what it seemed…
WARN: Don't read this if you expecting a story with realistic scene, realism, less nonsense, lots of action or fight scene since this story has none of that. This story focuses on yuri, mary sue, flawless MC, and sex.
WARN 2: If you don't like it, just leave and find one that you like rather than critizing this. This is very slow paced story.
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As the author, I must give this work of mine a shame 5 stars review because I just want it to increase the review, also because it's seems common thing to do.
Honestly this Author comes up with great ideas but never finishes their books and somehow all their stockpiled chapters disappear but I'll still read this one and still be upset when I find out it's dropped so good luck Author
I like the story and the characters but someday you will drop this fanfic because of the many plots (you write too many plots which might overwhelm you) And the character statistics are too much
[WARNING!! THIS HAS YURI & FUTANARI TAG!! IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE THAT TWO PARTICULAR GENRE I ADVISE YOU TO LEAVE!!] The concept of this FF is similar with CCG, like the mc reaction to the group chat that is similar with CCG mc, the only difference are this group only allow woman and including other world. The author is actually quite good writing a story with Yuri and Futa, and the story so far (chapter 2) is good (although most of it is like info dump). The minus of this story are about update schedule from what I see it's a mess, and some grammar mistakes occasionally.
I like this a lot. My only issue is that it needs a lot of editing as a lot of the sentences make no sense as they are either missing words entirely or just severely jumbled up in some cases. currently I'm only on chapter 9 but I hope it changes later on. I cant say much about the frequency of updates as I only just discovered this story and have not caught up. I like the character design of the MC and somewhat of the world background (though I cant say much there either as I haven't read\seen much to judge it yet but from the little I have seen its good). The story development is okay so far, again cant say too much yet as I haven't read far enough yet but its also decent from what I can see.
Meh it not too bad the chapter are long but at the same time they are filled with useless info that nobody wants to know Overall not bad keep going Author
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Honestly I would probably like it if it didn't have a lot of unneeded explanation, as well as the flow of the story could be improved a lot, characterization isn't the best but passable, All in all it needs a rewrite and it would be a 4.5 for the most part
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