/ Anime & Comics / Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
摘要
Dave died and surprisingly reincarnated with all his memories.
Unfortunately, it seems to be earth. Japan to be specific. Naruki City. Hmm sounds vaguely familiar. Maybe it was on the news or something. Oh well. Worse yet he has to learn Japanese from scratch, he has no special powers or system. What kind of lame reincarnation is this? No isekai, no powers, no system? Why even reincarnate. Also it seems to be the past, no smartphone and computers are backwards as all hell. Things just can't be worse.
That is until he unfortunately dies again. However as he lay there bleeding out and slowly dying he finally realised he wasn't reincarnated on the real Earth. This was the world of Bleach and he was attacked by White and infected by his hollowfication poison. Can't he catch a break? He doesn't even get a chance to become a regular spirit and maybe a Shinigami. Just a mindless hollow.
[...Initialising]
[Status: Dying/Hollowfication]
[Action: Preserving consciousness]
[Success]
[Action: Prevent Hollowfication]
[...Error...Failure...]
[Second Attempt]
[Failure]
[Third Attempt]
[Failure]
[Action abandoned]
[Hollow System Initialised]
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The general idea for this fanfic is to explore the hollow side of the story more than the original story does through the perspective of an protagonist that has Isekai'd into the world of Bleach with knowledge of the events. He just doesn't know he has been Isekai'd into Bleach at first.
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honestly, pretty frickin good the writing quality- I don't really have a master degree in English but I don't see any flaws so 5 stars updates- really good, getting updated a couple times a day 5 stars story development- the story develops really well there wasn't really any arcs so I cant say about the future but for now 5 stars character design- first of all mama mia those are some good characters the OC's are well done especially the MC they feel like how real people talk react and think world background- ...its bleach
I usually don't write a review because they mostly get deleted but I still decided to drop a review for this fic... This fic really needs a review which pointed out it faults. I am trying to help you out as this is a good fanfic. If you ignore this or delete this, I won't mind. Writing Quality- 4 stars Your paragraphs are huge. Please don't write such huge paragraphs. It gets really annoying to read but aside that, everything is fine. Story Development- 3 stars There are is a lot of mess you have have made in the story but you still trying to force the plot to continue on its path. Character Design- 2 stars You main character is a controversy. I won't go into the mess about anti-hero. He said that he wanted to go unnoticed by Aizen and the goes to Hueco Mundo,that is Aizen's backyard. I understand that the system is hiding his presence so I will leave that aside. He said that he didn't want to change the timeline but he goes and saves Ichigo's mother. With Yhwach's broken ability known as Almighty, there is no way that he wouldn't notice that. Even if system helps to hide the woman, saving Ichigo's mom means that Isshin Kurosaki won't get back his powers. In the canon he only got back his Soul Reaper powers when his wife died. And there is also the fact that the MC killed Aizen's pet project to save Ichigo's mom. I bet the system can't hide that. So, you have already changed the plot so much that you simply can't continue with the same timeline. Updating Stanility- 5 stars World Background- 5 stars That's my review. As I said previously, I don't mind if you delete this but it will do you good if you consider the things I have just mentioned...
This fanfic is tagged wrong. This fanfic has no Anti hero development in story and the character of the MC is exactly opposite. If anyone wants to read this fanfic due to its ‘Anti-Hero’ tag, then don’t even bother to read it. I was attracted to this fanfic because of its Anti hero tag and it being Bleach fanfic which is rare, but i had to drop reading this fanfic because there is nothing Antihero in this fanfic. MC is too much of a ‘Good Boy’.
Alright, review, so : -Writing Quality 3/5 Writing is ok, not fantastic but not unreadable. -Stability of Updates 5/5 Nothing to say here, update are often Story Development 2/5 Imo, the story doesn't make sense. Like, he got some cool stat with system but he is the only one with stat at the moment so... Great? I mean it's cool to see that he got 35 in dext and 20 in constitution but is that a lot? Can we have like , i don't know, the arrancar/espada stat to have a comparison? Maybe i read too fast but i can't remember any other stat except a the start when the system said that standart humans have 1 in all stat. The story in himself is ok, but a lot of his action doesn't make sense imo. He don't want to endanger his family but stay in the house forever , don't want to alert Aizen/Yhwach but decide to save Ichigo's mom, then go to Hueco Mundo (aka Aizen's turf) , don't want to alert shinigami but kill every hollow he detect , don't want to change the plot yet go kill Grand Fischer who is litteraly Aizen's experimentation and one of the Arrancar prototype with the hogyoku later in the manga.... Do i need to continue? Character Design 3/5 Nothing special, the mc isn't badly written, but nothing exceptionnal , the only other character (that we see talking at this point) are Masaki and his sister (MC's sister) who are kind of the same even if the sister feel at least a bit humain and not just an NPC World Background 4/5 World background is bleach so great but i don't give 5 cuz it's more repetition of what bleach is than new place, etc... In conclusion, a lot of good idea, but a bad execution.
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Saving Masaki is a Brainless logic move... (Masaki is Ichigo's mom that was killed by a hollow as Ichigo was younger) And I almost had hope for your novel
its decent but there are useless and braindead decisions as well which doesn't make sense (my guess is that its a way of self insertion for author perhaps) so if you don't like useless decisions then I guess this ain't for you. peace ✌
Saving Ichigo's mother stupidly killed the desire to read. How is she better or worse than thousands and millions of other people? Because she's the mother of the anime's protagonist? Take such a risk, move to another city, follow the Ichigo family to save one person! I'm outraged! Written well, but here I go.
Shameless author self review. Just wanted to say this is my first attempt at a fanfic, hopefully you like it. If you have any tips or feedback feel free to let me know as I would love to improve my writing.
not gonna get dropped he said. he's just busy with work he said. updated 6 months ago.......................................................
Really goooddd please don't drop this, thx for the chapters, I love how the MC seems intelligent for now and atleast thinks ahead.. .......
Definitely a waste of time. The protagonist is so rediculously arrogant and whiny at the beginning that it was unsufferable. There is a million ways he could have rapidly improved his strength, such as going to the wilderness to hunt animal souls or sneaking into prisons and eating the souls of death row prisoners. Instead, he decided to go 'save' Masaki by kidnapping her for 6 to 7 years under the guise that he killed her when he is literally a bug that can easily be crushed to death by any random mob. 2.8/5 stars.
very meh. Grammar 2 Story, mc keeps changing personality, not even talking about growth. just straight pshyco.very meh. Grammar 2 Story, mc keeps changing personality, not even talking about growth. just straight pshyco.very meh. Grammar 2 Story, mc keeps changing personality, not even talking about growth. just straight pshyco.very meh. Grammar 2 Story, mc keeps changing personality, not even talking about growth. just straight pshyco.
excellent fanfiction, entertaining and easy to get hooked on. the MC is a relatively ordinary person with some logical thinking. I like how the story is developing and I would like to ask the AUTHOR-DONO that the MC please have a harem and the sister be part of the harem.
this is really a great fan-fic, the mc is not an idiot and doesnt suddenly become op with the help of plot armor. I really like what the author did with the character interaction i absolutly love that he still has connections with his sister which makes this novel feel very special. All in all i hope that you can keep up writing this novel:)
story is good but the cover is not necessarily welcoming so if u put a better cover u will get more viewers.................................
I'm not very good at writing in English, but I can read relatively well, so I'm going to use google translator to write this message, author, it's amazing the novel, so go on, I found it super innovative to make a hollow character, not QUINCY, SHINIGAMI or FULLBRINGER. So don't stop.
I really like the story and it makes you want to read more I can’t wait for more and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
I think the story more or less I don't think it's bad but I don't think it's good either😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Mc's character is perfect. Not too manipulative nor too goody shoes. I like his interactions with his family and Hollow species seems to have immense potential. In all this is a good fanfic even more because there are no good nowadays.