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honestly, pretty frickin good the writing quality- I don't really have a master degree in English but I don't see any flaws so 5 stars updates- really good, getting updated a couple times a day 5 stars story development- the story develops really well there wasn't really any arcs so I cant say about the future but for now 5 stars character design- first of all mama mia those are some good characters the OC's are well done especially the MC they feel like how real people talk react and think world background- ...its bleach
I usually don't write a review because they mostly get deleted but I still decided to drop a review for this fic... This fic really needs a review which pointed out it faults. I am trying to help you out as this is a good fanfic. If you ignore this or delete this, I won't mind. Writing Quality- 4 stars Your paragraphs are huge. Please don't write such huge paragraphs. It gets really annoying to read but aside that, everything is fine. Story Development- 3 stars There are is a lot of mess you have have made in the story but you still trying to force the plot to continue on its path. Character Design- 2 stars You main character is a controversy. I won't go into the mess about anti-hero. He said that he wanted to go unnoticed by Aizen and the goes to Hueco Mundo,that is Aizen's backyard. I understand that the system is hiding his presence so I will leave that aside. He said that he didn't want to change the timeline but he goes and saves Ichigo's mother. With Yhwach's broken ability known as Almighty, there is no way that he wouldn't notice that. Even if system helps to hide the woman, saving Ichigo's mom means that Isshin Kurosaki won't get back his powers. In the canon he only got back his Soul Reaper powers when his wife died. And there is also the fact that the MC killed Aizen's pet project to save Ichigo's mom. I bet the system can't hide that. So, you have already changed the plot so much that you simply can't continue with the same timeline. Updating Stanility- 5 stars World Background- 5 stars That's my review. As I said previously, I don't mind if you delete this but it will do you good if you consider the things I have just mentioned...
Please start it back up ive been waiting and missing it since its such a good series with a great story line. Also i cant wait to see if you will bring filler arcs into the story and i want to see the mc evolve even further it will be so amazing and im excited
Thank you because of you I was able to find all the other stories on heel and more.Thank you truly.Thank you for making this if you Never make this. I will never found any of this one more time. Thank you.
The best Bleach fanfic I've read so far. MC's personality is very good. He's not very manipulative or innocent. I particularly like that the author changes the original plot since I'm reading a fanfic.
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I quite like it but the only thing bothered me is the slow update rate. Its been 3 years and the mc isnt even an arrancar yet. And how long would it take for him to get back with his family? In 10 more years at this rate
I couldn't find the chapters were it stated why he didn't use transcription again but can't he ask the system if it will still give abilitys? Cause it answered him at the start.
揭示劇透 love it I enjoy willing this. I'm hoping 1 day this could become real cause it is pretty good. You should be proud of yourself, man.
I quite enjoy this novel though am annoyed a little that they included non-canon filler (the bount arc hate the arc especially since it was a waste of time while watching the anime) still a great read
The author of this fanfic tells a well-developed and explained story, with an intelligent and charismatic protagonist, and paying close attention to the details. The dialogues, the battles, the development of the circumstances, the background of the characters and their personalities... Everything is developed and illustrated in a meticulous way that makes you feel like you are truly watching the original series from a new perspective, not like reading a parody that makes reference to it. Although the mc has a system, it's based exclusively on canon material, and even with it, the mc has to struggle and invest time in becoming stronger, instead of the system giving him all the skills he needs and making him invincible without difficulty or development. Also, the author includes anime-exclusive material in a fluid and precise manner, making it feel natural to the story rather than just forcing it in without much thought, and always sticks to following the story canonically without including original stuff that would taint the work. Although to impatient readers it may seem like the author prolongs the story longer than necessary, he really just takes the time to develop it in the most eloquent, realistic and detail-oriented possible way. And as someone who values quality, I can only feel respect and appreciation for that. The only problem with the fanfic is that it has several grammar mistakes. However, on its patreon page, I have personally taken it upon myself to point out every grammatical error I have been able to see in each of its chapters, down to the last one. So, if the author continues writing as he has until now, continues the story until the end of the franchise (Tite Kubo novels and Echoing Jaws of Hell arc still unconfirmed) and corrects all the mistakes I've detailed (on patreon and on webnovel), and I'd say without fear that this is the best isekai (transmigration) anime fanfic I've read so far. And I can safely say that it would also be one of the best of this genre for anyone who gave it a try and had the patience to appreciate its quality.
Très bonne fanfiction sur Bleach 😉, j'apprécie aussi l'approche de l'auteur de s'intégrer à l'histoire sans en faire trop avec le mc s'occupant d'abord de sa condition, affaire à suivre 🤞
I love this story that you make I'm enjoying it I hope you continue to make more about this story keep up the good work -----------------------------
Grammar good some inconsistenmcies at times but dosen't change the quality Devlopment is amazing Character design is also fantastic And the world bg is perfect more more more
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Prognastat Great Fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this bleach fanfic directly after Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system A fan of the Bleach Manga and Anime dies in car crash after He meets God and asks to be sent to Bleach with Zoro’s Three Sword Style From One piece and He wants the time to be a year before ichigo and Rukia meets each other. Harem Michiru Ogawa Orihime Inoue Ryo Kunieda Chizuru Honsho Tatsuki Arisawa Misato Ochi Yoruichi Shihoin Kūkaku Shiba Rangiku Matsumoto Retsu Unohana Katen Kyokotsu Tier Harribel Franceska Mila Rose Luppi Antenor Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck Cirucci Sanderwicci Kyoko Haida Haruko Kirio Hikifune Senjumaru Shutara
It’s more like a summary of a story, very little detail and massive time skips. At least for the first 30+ chapters. Incredibly annoying. It’s a great idea, but the lack of detail makes it poorly executed.
it's decent but, sometimes they just make brain-dead decision. I just stopped reading when he saved ichigo's mother.
I really like the story and it makes you want to read more I can’t wait for more and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewing as of chapter 102, I’ve got to say that I am loving the story so far! Although in the world of bleach he is technically gaining power at an astonishing rate, the pacing is really good! It makes the achievements of the main character feel much more meaningful than if he went from fishbone to Vasto lorde Arrancar in the span of 10 chapters. This pacing has also allowed the relationships between the MC and the characters in bleach to feel real. I can’t wait to see what the author will do with his relationship with Ichigo’s mother and how he could potentially play part in later arcs such as the invasion of Karakura(if that’s how you spell it lol) or thhe thousand year blood war arc. Love it, excited to see what you’ll do with this!
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es una buena historia y entretenida espero que saques más capítulos pronto ya que es adictiva
5/3/5/5/5 this is one of the fics that I am always waiting for to update, writing is good, characters are great, story could be better but I will still give it 5 stars cause it doesn't make any mistakes and nothing is done that destroys the world of bleach so the world background is also 5 stars if only updates could be more frequent but maybe I am just being sour in giving it a 3 there
So far it's really well thought out and the decisions made do make sense to their ends. The MC has a fairly human outlook and makes sense in his own rites and rituals. His design is also epic sounding. The world state hasn't changed too much so far we still have the side arcs to go into and a lot of the subplot is yet to be touched.
This story is really thought out.The developments are realistic and touching.Characters are well developed work well in the face of circumstances.
I love the direction of the story you get to see different aspects of bleach that aren't shown and that character building is amazing. I can't even put into words how much I love this story.
A very good bleach fic. It has no major turn offs. The mc is also neither too selfish or too goody two shoes. A good system that doesn’t makes the op from the start, the interactions are realistic. A very good read i would say.
I really liked the story and the consept. i hope you keep writhing......................................................................................................
Amazing fan fic, sad that the author went to get milk and never came back though :( still an awesome book 9/10 would read again.
Mc's character is perfect. Not too manipulative nor too goody shoes. I like his interactions with his family and Hollow species seems to have immense potential. In all this is a good fanfic even more because there are no good nowadays.
honestly, pretty frickin good the writing quality- I don't really have a master degree in English but I don't see any flaws so 5 stars updates- really good, getting updated a couple times a day 5 stars story development- the story develops really well there wasn't really any arcs so I cant say about the future but for now 5 stars character design- first of all mama mia those are some good characters the OC's are well done especially the MC they feel like how real people talk react and think world background- ...its bleach
I usually don't write a review because they mostly get deleted but I still decided to drop a review for this fic... This fic really needs a review which pointed out it faults. I am trying to help you out as this is a good fanfic. If you ignore this or delete this, I won't mind. Writing Quality- 4 stars Your paragraphs are huge. Please don't write such huge paragraphs. It gets really annoying to read but aside that, everything is fine. Story Development- 3 stars There are is a lot of mess you have have made in the story but you still trying to force the plot to continue on its path. Character Design- 2 stars You main character is a controversy. I won't go into the mess about anti-hero. He said that he wanted to go unnoticed by Aizen and the goes to Hueco Mundo,that is Aizen's backyard. I understand that the system is hiding his presence so I will leave that aside. He said that he didn't want to change the timeline but he goes and saves Ichigo's mother. With Yhwach's broken ability known as Almighty, there is no way that he wouldn't notice that. Even if system helps to hide the woman, saving Ichigo's mom means that Isshin Kurosaki won't get back his powers. In the canon he only got back his Soul Reaper powers when his wife died. And there is also the fact that the MC killed Aizen's pet project to save Ichigo's mom. I bet the system can't hide that. So, you have already changed the plot so much that you simply can't continue with the same timeline. Updating Stanility- 5 stars World Background- 5 stars That's my review. As I said previously, I don't mind if you delete this but it will do you good if you consider the things I have just mentioned...
Please start it back up ive been waiting and missing it since its such a good series with a great story line. Also i cant wait to see if you will bring filler arcs into the story and i want to see the mc evolve even further it will be so amazing and im excited
Thank you because of you I was able to find all the other stories on heel and more.Thank you truly.Thank you for making this if you Never make this. I will never found any of this one more time. Thank you.
The best Bleach fanfic I've read so far. MC's personality is very good. He's not very manipulative or innocent. I particularly like that the author changes the original plot since I'm reading a fanfic.
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I quite like it but the only thing bothered me is the slow update rate. Its been 3 years and the mc isnt even an arrancar yet. And how long would it take for him to get back with his family? In 10 more years at this rate
I couldn't find the chapters were it stated why he didn't use transcription again but can't he ask the system if it will still give abilitys? Cause it answered him at the start.
揭示劇透 love it I enjoy willing this. I'm hoping 1 day this could become real cause it is pretty good. You should be proud of yourself, man.
I quite enjoy this novel though am annoyed a little that they included non-canon filler (the bount arc hate the arc especially since it was a waste of time while watching the anime) still a great read
The author of this fanfic tells a well-developed and explained story, with an intelligent and charismatic protagonist, and paying close attention to the details. The dialogues, the battles, the development of the circumstances, the background of the characters and their personalities... Everything is developed and illustrated in a meticulous way that makes you feel like you are truly watching the original series from a new perspective, not like reading a parody that makes reference to it. Although the mc has a system, it's based exclusively on canon material, and even with it, the mc has to struggle and invest time in becoming stronger, instead of the system giving him all the skills he needs and making him invincible without difficulty or development. Also, the author includes anime-exclusive material in a fluid and precise manner, making it feel natural to the story rather than just forcing it in without much thought, and always sticks to following the story canonically without including original stuff that would taint the work. Although to impatient readers it may seem like the author prolongs the story longer than necessary, he really just takes the time to develop it in the most eloquent, realistic and detail-oriented possible way. And as someone who values quality, I can only feel respect and appreciation for that. The only problem with the fanfic is that it has several grammar mistakes. However, on its patreon page, I have personally taken it upon myself to point out every grammatical error I have been able to see in each of its chapters, down to the last one. So, if the author continues writing as he has until now, continues the story until the end of the franchise (Tite Kubo novels and Echoing Jaws of Hell arc still unconfirmed) and corrects all the mistakes I've detailed (on patreon and on webnovel), and I'd say without fear that this is the best isekai (transmigration) anime fanfic I've read so far. And I can safely say that it would also be one of the best of this genre for anyone who gave it a try and had the patience to appreciate its quality.
Très bonne fanfiction sur Bleach 😉, j'apprécie aussi l'approche de l'auteur de s'intégrer à l'histoire sans en faire trop avec le mc s'occupant d'abord de sa condition, affaire à suivre 🤞
I love this story that you make I'm enjoying it I hope you continue to make more about this story keep up the good work -----------------------------
Grammar good some inconsistenmcies at times but dosen't change the quality Devlopment is amazing Character design is also fantastic And the world bg is perfect more more more
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Prognastat Great Fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this bleach fanfic directly after Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system A fan of the Bleach Manga and Anime dies in car crash after He meets God and asks to be sent to Bleach with Zoro’s Three Sword Style From One piece and He wants the time to be a year before ichigo and Rukia meets each other. Harem Michiru Ogawa Orihime Inoue Ryo Kunieda Chizuru Honsho Tatsuki Arisawa Misato Ochi Yoruichi Shihoin Kūkaku Shiba Rangiku Matsumoto Retsu Unohana Katen Kyokotsu Tier Harribel Franceska Mila Rose Luppi Antenor Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck Cirucci Sanderwicci Kyoko Haida Haruko Kirio Hikifune Senjumaru Shutara
It’s more like a summary of a story, very little detail and massive time skips. At least for the first 30+ chapters. Incredibly annoying. It’s a great idea, but the lack of detail makes it poorly executed.
it's decent but, sometimes they just make brain-dead decision. I just stopped reading when he saved ichigo's mother.
I really like the story and it makes you want to read more I can’t wait for more and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewing as of chapter 102, I’ve got to say that I am loving the story so far! Although in the world of bleach he is technically gaining power at an astonishing rate, the pacing is really good! It makes the achievements of the main character feel much more meaningful than if he went from fishbone to Vasto lorde Arrancar in the span of 10 chapters. This pacing has also allowed the relationships between the MC and the characters in bleach to feel real. I can’t wait to see what the author will do with his relationship with Ichigo’s mother and how he could potentially play part in later arcs such as the invasion of Karakura(if that’s how you spell it lol) or thhe thousand year blood war arc. Love it, excited to see what you’ll do with this!
揭示劇透 es una buena historia y entretenida espero que saques más capítulos pronto ya que es adictiva
5/3/5/5/5 this is one of the fics that I am always waiting for to update, writing is good, characters are great, story could be better but I will still give it 5 stars cause it doesn't make any mistakes and nothing is done that destroys the world of bleach so the world background is also 5 stars if only updates could be more frequent but maybe I am just being sour in giving it a 3 there
So far it's really well thought out and the decisions made do make sense to their ends. The MC has a fairly human outlook and makes sense in his own rites and rituals. His design is also epic sounding. The world state hasn't changed too much so far we still have the side arcs to go into and a lot of the subplot is yet to be touched.
This story is really thought out.The developments are realistic and touching.Characters are well developed work well in the face of circumstances.
I love the direction of the story you get to see different aspects of bleach that aren't shown and that character building is amazing. I can't even put into words how much I love this story.
A very good bleach fic. It has no major turn offs. The mc is also neither too selfish or too goody two shoes. A good system that doesn’t makes the op from the start, the interactions are realistic. A very good read i would say.
I really liked the story and the consept. i hope you keep writhing......................................................................................................
Amazing fan fic, sad that the author went to get milk and never came back though :( still an awesome book 9/10 would read again.
Mc's character is perfect. Not too manipulative nor too goody shoes. I like his interactions with his family and Hollow species seems to have immense potential. In all this is a good fanfic even more because there are no good nowadays.