摘要
Alexander, a teenage boy who hates the Flash TV series (Arrowverse), gets killed and is reborn as a twin brother of Barry Allen.
This is a story about his adventures and the changes that he will bring as a sibling of the Flash.
This is my first fan-fic novel.
[Tags]: R-18, System, Hero who is not a hypocrite
Current schedule: 3-5 chapters per week. Chapters will be released on any days.
Bonus chapter sometimes if I am very free
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The first 20 chapters where great. There was a lot of interaction between the characters from the source material and the OC which is good as when creating a fanfic with an OC, what makes a OC fanfic unique is what the OC add to the original cast of characters in terms of world building and character development. Although I personally do not like system protagonist as it is overdone, it is not a breaking point for the novel. What I did not enjoy the last few chapters as it is just boring superhero saving the day with nothing differentiating it from other novels furthermore, the updates have been slow and chapters too short to fully get immersed in the story. Overall, a good read if you don't mind waiting and stockpiling.
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looking forward to the the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ................................................................. ............................................ ...................... ............ .... .
No harem supergirl it just sounds better and besides she needs some love cause of all the mess in the show and the one guy leaves her so yea aupergirl and the phantom
Really I think that you need to slowly down the pace and make sure he doesn't grow too large to quickly So that you can slowly devolop the character and love interests .have him find out more on his power and original ways to use like mabye speeding up his heart rate to increase oxygen flow into his head and gain a adrenaline beserk state.use your head to do creative things and have him interact with Barry as the phantom mabye train him up a little as your the senior speedster.
it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!! it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!!it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!!
man please 😭😭😭🥺🙏🥺 🥺🙏🥺🥺🙏 update more chapters I can't wait anymore it's such a awesome story please update it man
Author Please Increase the release pace increase the release. more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,
Are you dropping this please dont its a good story please dont drop this story. .
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Sorry, but I feel like I need to drop this novel. While on the one hand I overall like the direction of the story, there's just a few too many things that are hard to swallow. It's great that he can travel to other worlds like the Flash has done with his super speed. But where the the rented apartment come from? And the Ferrari? It's not like you'd be able to rent that car from anywhere. I can give a pass to the slow and inconsistent updates, or the writing quality. As I mentioned before, I tend to like the direction the story is going. Still, when combined with the flaws I mentioned above it's just too much.
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This novel only hase one flaw what bot really can be cald a flaw I say this because evry thing in this novel i think is awsome and i really hope he wil chance te plot. But de release date is low bit if you can look over that problem this is one of the best fanfic put there
Creator your fan fic with the flash is so good with op system and all but what the hell some parts where iris is still like what with barry on that verse place thought you might mix it up but still good no prob just when is the epic showing of each respective participants and story plots.
This is absolutely terrible it doesn’t have an ounce of character development and the system just makes the power system confusing and overpowered.
This didn’t really change much from the first time. I’m not sure if it’s the author or something but I still don’t like this Mc and System……………..
I really hope you continue this or redo it as this is the best book of the arrow verse I have seen and read but I get it if you don't, I hope you make more books as you seem like you got good ideas and you know how to use them to make people like your book
The only bad thing with this story, in my opinion, is the fact that there are slow updates and the conversations are pretty bland and make me want to cringe. Things like "Hi Alex." "Hi, Cisco." It ruins the story for me personally. Other than that, good job author!!
this story is good and I'm looking forward for more chapters or the remake and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
It’s good if u do ever remake it and go with super girl as is girl and only girl no harem he should only share his secret with her and make it a small more intimate they feel like only friends also have him stay in super girl for a while and only come back at the final fight between Flash and reverse
Finally man a person who write about my favorite super hero, man you should not drop this, its an awesome novel, with a great development, it has potential, and about the options i choose the second one. Cheers mate keep up the good work