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摘要
After dying from his previous life, Lucas finds himself reborn as a baby the next moment.
Eh? Why are my mother and father not here?
Why is the old guy called Alfred?
Wait, you say my older brother is named Bruce?
My family name is also Wayne?
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COMPLETED!!!!!!!!
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AN: This is a trial DC fanfic that I had written in the past which I wanted to see if it's any good before continuing...I will be releasing the first 13 chapters and would observe it for a while before continuing so updates from chapter 14 onwards will not be anytime soon :P
Cover art is temp. Just something from the net...and edited by a certain Kitsune :P
**BE WARNED, THERE ARE R-18 SCENES HERE WHERE THE MC DOES IT WITH WOMEN THAT ARE MAYBE OVER A THOUSAND YEARS OLD! XD**
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the start was interesting then he suddenly start thinking with his dick instead of his brain, it was a good fan fic until all girls suddenly introduced and having sex with a princess you just met she's such a slut princess isn't she??
Man this is great. Are you a genius. Please more chapters.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I thought I found a novel with a lot of potential to become something great,and it was at least for the first couple chapters but I was blinded with the thought that this novel was amazing but with the recent chapters I have made the discovery that this isn't anything special it's just a crappy harem novel with a 2-D MC and OPness not used right. The characters that are more than 2-D like wonder women and Barbara Gordon,they just become females addicted to MCs cock. This novel is a waste of time and I'm very mad at myself for duping myself into thinking this novel isn't anything more than a harem. So in short i was stupid enough to think this was a quality novel and I'm also mad that I wasted power stones on it.
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Loved the novel so far. Read and find out😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
1. The Mc sucks, he somehow always end up with every girl loving him and ordering him around. 2. The author keeps forcing girl into liking the Mc, like when he ****ed Wonder women, she said they become lovers. Like wtf! Don't forget she ****ed him because she was curious, which makes it more weird, and guess what the except. 4. All I all the story is good without all the fucking girl, I cringe imagining some peaple liking that ****, anyway the story by itself is good, but romance and haram makes it ****, I stoped around chapter 12, because of all the fucking girl that the Mc cares for. I don't have anything against girls, it's just the Mc portrays them like there his Wives or mother, anyway this story isnt for you if you don't like an Mc who forcibly end up with girl loving him, and an mc who gets order around by women. And lastly and beta mc
Author says the MC is 20+ mentally, then writes him getting turned on by little girls, and being extremely awkward and stupid. He literally gives 1 billion dollars to fucking Jonathon Kent and they accept It almost instantly. This is just cringy.
I really don't know how to look at the mc, is he a kid? a man? maybe a child is more mature than him, the thing he wants the most is the sympathy of the world, talking about his dead parent and brother to every new friend. and the mc or the author seems to have a hero complex
I get it, I get it. Another book that could have done better than having the mc getting leashed by the women around him. Every other girl is curious about this guy and eventually, maybe in a day or two will become his lover. Very realistic.
don't g to UK of sh you had an old see what I'll I'm just so I'll if we do it out of an lol of sh oh it so it all if all tell em risk to to to the
Lol great story I can't help but laugh at his antics hey I know you said this is a trial story but I hope you keep it going it's very good and the grammar is top notch plus the chp length is great
every plot development till now has been a forced one by writer( and it wasn't smooth one believe you me.) system synchronisation take 10 years WTF...and said quote Download system wtf×2 is our brain an actual hardware cypernatic that we have to download datas. and MC is 10. years old in grade 3 wtf shitty writer forcing romance that what it is....and if 10 years old in grade 3 is genius lvl than what **** am I? IQ 300+ is I am If grade 3 is for 12 yrs old .... cause I was in grade 6 when I was 10 years old... why does a MC has a hero complex when he is already an *****.....****k can already tell author is a pre**** with naive believes ...**** you boy, don't waste your time on this shitty novel... Can't believe writer just shitted the GREAT Bruce Wayne only for his ego...
Genuinely one of the worst thing's i've read...............................................................................................................................................
My dude please don't drop this story, this is the most interesting dc fanfic I have ever heard and I want you continue, please continue this book I beg of you, I will wait for eternity until you post the next chapter
The author is a pedophile through and through. Also, if you can't write romance or harem why even try? A 12 year kid banging fully grown Wonder Woman does not make for good harem or any literature in general.
it has a great potential but you author san wasted it.. The MC himself has already a cheat... "knowledge of the future" and "being rich" but the author san here is not satisfied of that !!!! THE F****** SYSTEM HIMSELF DESCENDENT TO ADD TO MC'S CHEAT!!!! Though i have no problem in the harem... if you just put some logic behind it!!! Personality wise the mc himself is no different on those jap harem mc "busybody" Welp it's a fanfic... hope the author san improve more in the future !! Sayonara **: Lord of the Mysteries is amazing author san should need to read this amazing novel !!
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My dude please don't drop this story, this is the most interesting dc fanfic I have ever heard and I want you continue, please continue this book I beg of you, I will wait for eternity until you post the next chapter
I love the characters. OC Lucas is funny as well, the system makes him overpowered. I want more chapters. I just like harem in general. I have nothing else to say.
the mc is the usual mc that can destroy everyone in fighting and dialogue(sometimes without it even making sense). the dialogue is bad, not that you cant understand it like 50% of fan fics but its cringe af and it always depicts the mc as cool and without flaws and worse of all it has harem. but it could be fun for some people I guess
WHAT the Fking god take you so long to release this novel!!!!!!😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕