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If she were to make the choice again, she would never have let her two-faced, sickly sister use her as a personal blood bank. She simply wanted to live her own life.
But in her previous life, she ended up neglecting that intimidating young boy.
When she escaped the hospital in an anaemic state with nowhere to go, she fainted in the streets. He brought her home, took care of her meticulously, and cherished her.
For countless long nights, he would kiss the ugly scar on her spine where they drew blood from her.
Even after her death, he went mad and broke into the funeral to take her ice-cold body.
Returning to when she was 16, Ji Bai seemed to not be afraid of him. When he stared at her from a dark and gloomy corner, Ji Bai looked back at him with a sweet smile and wanted to spoil him.
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I like the plot. ML being a bad boy is novel to me. the painful part is the writing. there's no editing at all.
bad translation. hard to understand because of the translation, story jumps around.
i actually like the plot and how the story developed. it's like one step at a time. But deym i dont have any free pass lol
does anyone know the raw of this story ? I really liked the story but there are a lot of error.
To be honest the book is good BUT if you can edit it, it's going to be GREAT
Dear Heaven but this is hard work - the story is fascinating but the writing is A W F U L . This is obviously an MTL with very little editing. if anyone has the good will to edit this they'll have all my fps!!
The translation is terrible. It is not just the he's and she's mixed up. It must be an auto translation.
My head hurts from reading bad translation. it’s like a caveman was talking in my head.
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Give it a try, you won't regret it! If you look past the wording and sentence construction, you will realize the potential of this novel. First time giving a review but this is worth it!
The story sounds good but the editing is non existent which makes it hard to read
translation worst then mlt 😭😭😭😭 so I drop .. I lost interest cz of bad translation, dam what a good read seading but waste in translation
the writing is messy i hope u can fix it i can't really understand some part of the story line
I have read this up to the unlock stage. It’s actually a very interesting plot and I like the characters especially the uniqueness of the ML not being some rich CEO or powerful mogul, but rather a bad boy from a tough upbringing who intimidates and fights, but who had been so gentle and loving of the FL. But I won’t pay to unlock a story that appears to gave been fed through Google translate and dumped here. It does no justice to the authors work and creativity to have it expressed so poorly. It wasn’t just consistent pronoun swapping, but odd misnaming of objects, like calling a bike a car, having a faucet on the (car) bike (I still haven’t figured that out), transparent skin, etc.. 🤯 It would be nice to find out that it gets an editor at some stage, but for now it’s dropped.
i was eager to read this. but the writing is toooo bad. I dont know if it's mtl or the author wrote it. I hope this gets some good editing and proofreading done 💔
Love the possibilities of this story. It's original, but the trans suffer with major gramm errors making it hard to follow. Unfortunately the fans only get less than 20 pages free, not enough to grip a Fans interest. As a fan with the Quality of the trans I'm dropping this story as for paying...
The translation is not good. à lot of mistakes like "your" instead of "her".