摘要
Liu Yang was a common employee, he had no perspective for his life. He only lived in a common and ordinary way, he had fun when he could.
However, everything changed during his journey to work. There was a police chase, and he was shot by mistake.
When he wakes up, he discovers that he is in the other world and that he could have a new chance at life in a different world from the previous one.
At that moment he begins to think about the best ways to live the new life as much as possible.
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Sorry for bad English in the first chapters.
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I'm a novice writer of Web Novel. As a novice writer, I make several mistakes of inconsistency in history. I apologize for this. My English is very bad so sorry for that too
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it was pretty good but the story was like your typical isekai/reincarnation thing. the MC is a shameless,harem-seeking and pretty ruthless i think. he wont even think about making a friend with a man
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Everything sucks as if your first fifty chapters suck than how in the world are you gonna get readers. Writing style sucks, word arrangement sucks, don't know english, don't know how to or whete to use prepositions. Total **** story.
This story has a great start so far the only thing that takes you out of the story is the gender swapping sometimes the mc is male others female also a enchantress is normally associated with women and a enchanter for males please fix that as it makes no sense if that character was a male
The story started off ok until he was "reborn". It has a lot of inconsistencies. The MC seems know information that wasn't stated prior like people being able to give skills and so on. It honestly just got confusing and felt really rushed at points.
Very difficult read. Character creation is a bit rough. Also plot holes make you just go "what just happened?" To top it off with grammatical errors every other sentence. If you can get through all that, then you can finally get to a cliché filled story that is hard to follow. Gave it a good effort. Was too much a struggle for these eyes of mine...
The story is OKAY, however, every once in a while I start thinking "this is garbage". There was a chapter that talked about how you won't be able to kill a monster if you hit the leg when it's HP is at 1. There was a whole tangent about how this was real life and whatnot...I digress. The main thing that caught me off guard is that he has been in the first woods he landed in for five plus years. You would think he would have figured that out by now. Another aspect is when he gets his class. He was suppose to have been battered by the elements, but reading that chapter I felt the author might have well just given him the class. The first element was fire, it was meant to burn his soul and body and that somewhat portrayed. He just clenched his teeth and withstood it. Thing is, how could he. He was a regular person, before the reincarnation, spent five plus years in the woods to level (by the way only getting to about 15, which is bull...five year and only 15 when the first monster he kills gets him like 9 levels), then you are expected to feel like he's a tough dude. Didn't get that. I mean fire, water, wind, earth, metal, ect. was attacking his soul and body, and you expect me to believe he just clenched his teeth and withstood it from some inner strength? Nah. If you had made it a point in those five year he was in the woods to toughen the MC mentally and physically...then yeah, I'll buy it...but you didn't. And the skills that the wolf passed to him, the heal, purify and the others, I can get how that can happen. I mean the wolf is supposedly bad ass. I can get behind that. Thing is we are never really explained to of how skills get around, how they are passed, conditions, ect. It just seems like anyone can pass skills around like that if they have a technique, which I'm guessing is a no. So, I would have like to have seen more in the shape of an explanation of what skills are, how do you get them, can you get a skill outside you class, can you work towards a skill or do they just use skills books. Also, I get the felling that there is no order...or rather no reason as to why he has done a lot of the things he's done and if there were it's not really well written out. This novel tries to make the MC mysterious, but in the end it fails..with the whole "No Name" alias he uses in the brothel, I get that his status screen doesn't have a name for him, but that alias is just dumb. Overall, this story tires, but fails in my opinion.
... punches MC in face since she is naked on top.... MC explains he saved her life. She thanks him. They end up flirting, hugging, kissing and she says "Be gentle" ... Seriou...?
Just started. Only read a few chapters . But I am already thinking of dropping it. The grammar is horrible. And from the comments I have seen, the author hasn't hired an editor or done anything to fix this for the last 8 months. For those not bothered by horrible grammar give it a try. For me, it's a deal-breaker.
NOT WORTH TO READ. THIZ WILL JUST MAKE YOUR MOOD SO BAD THAT MAKES YOU PUNCH THE AUTHOR! FUCKING 5 YEARS TIMESKIP BUT HE ONLY FUCKING GAIN A 5 LEVELS? SERIOUSLY!! THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I READ THIS KIND OF TRASHY TIMESKIP. DONT BOTHER READING THIS GUYS THIS IS JUST A PURE CANCER NOVEL
Little to no idea of what's going on story wise, main character is random at best, wakes up in a new world and is okay with it and acting like he knows what's going on like he has a great plan when we the readers don't even understand what he's doing and why but it just works, suddenly a love interest that make no sense and happens like i saved you now love me, then they split up and the more plans that you don't know about or understand.
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Translation is like its generated by machinenovel And story is just dumb He is literally playing a game He is another world but his previous world knowledge is the best......WTF And that scene when he was in the cave with the girl ..it was like she was waiting for him to sleep with her... like he just touched her once and she pulled her clothes open for him to do her....WTF this novel is just waste of time!!
Thanks for this wonderful story I liked reading it. I hope you can continue to do what you do and not to be upset by the negative comments))))))))))
I liked this story. It's really good. The author does a good job. But now something strange happend all chapters, which were yesterday (3/7/2019) without any sign of locked/unlocked chapter mark, are now (3/8/2019) locked as Premium. In all other story I follow all chapters stayed free or are atleast marked as unlocked. Only new chapters are locked with a Spirt Stone pricetag. Now I'm focusing on my other stories for the time beeing and might comeback later again - maybe not.
As far as i read the story is not bad but there are lot of plot holes like killing monsters for 5 years only to lvl up from lvl 8 to lvl 18 man wtf did this guy do and the part where he killd his first human vut when he saved that princess we know that he kills lot of them.. and so on the stats are all equal well i know that his class is magical knight but way does he still get +2 to all stats he should get a bonus like +5 to all stats or does he need a bloodline for that.. anyway ty for writing this novel hope we can see more and sorry for my bad english
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ok if you are looking in reviews then to be honest the novel is as usual a Isekai op mc novel where there is no logic for events and if you think about why you should not read this novel because mc meats a divine wolf at chapter 6 so you get what am saying little bit work and here's is our mc with op level powers I kinda think that now days novels are less focus on story and making mc op from start fell kinda Iretating well I also like op mc like solo leveling and second life ranker but the mc in the start are not as op as this novel and I also forgot mention mc is also like man
Why did you have to choose human which atomically makes me drop the damn story since it’ll be hella boring. You should have never given Demons, Dragons or fairies as a option since it only shows the reader that the author could’ve made a interesting and cool character but instead opted for a human...
Most people are commenting about later on i got to chapter 5 but feel like I have missed about 100 nothing makes sense or it does to the me but not to the reader as nothing is explained and I mean nothing he dies and is told he will reincarnate to a world and that world will be random and he will get a power, does he check to see what his power is no because apparently he will lose his memories(not sure when we are told that but ok) then he choses the worst world to go to because of a reason he knows. Yep he chose it because we just ignore the fact that the world is meant to be random oh and if he loses his memories he won't even know why he should of chosen that world but OK, skip to him landing on the new world it works like a game he knows it acts like a game and thinks that's normal , wait what the actual **** is this story writing I got to him pulling some magic out of his ass and getting a transforming wolf girl dog thing before I gave up don't even bother trying if your actually after a story
The number of times that the words "envy, jealousy, activity (means sex), ass, breast," repeating each paragraph makes me crazy, it never always changes the same speech, always the same thing we know that the hero is good at sex we understood, we clearly understood after 100 chapter with the same thing develop a MC level power instead of stagnating everything, ****!
By chapter 12, MC saves a young master. The young master was wearing a disguise, turns out he is a she. She wakes up, punches MC in face since she is naked on top.... MC explains he saved her life. She thanks him. They end up flirting, hugging, kissing and she says "Be gentle" while MC gives her the meat🍆. Garbage writing like this is what bothers me. Way too forced. Romance was insanely rushed.... MC even has a damn soul bond with a half demon-half celestial wolf puppy by saving the mom Wolf who has a total of 15million HP. More crappy & forced than the most garbage cultivation novel. I had to drop it. Do not bother at all.