Rebirth of an Otaku in Naruto

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REMOK

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srVlad

I even wanted to keep up with it, but it's grossly disgusting. It seems that the MC is a retard that is only used by the own parents and by everybody else. Disappointing. It's no use gaining power if you do not have a brain.

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GGMissFortune

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jesusguero25

Keep going. ......................................................................................................................................

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_James_Jones_

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InnerVoice

I thought it was an otaku that got transmigrated or reborn into naruto so why did the synopsis said a retire assassin instead? I’m very disappointed thus the one star tetietidhkchkfkyfouykufxgxxjgxgjxkydgkxgkxgkxgkxgjxgkxkgdykxkgdkydykdgkxkgdkgxgjdiyxggztiditdtjxitstjzjtzjtsjgxti

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black07messenger

Okay. Had many mistake but its good. The story of Daniel that got reborn in the world of Naruto. He was born as Sora and his twin is Naruto. He was born , for me his OP. And had a harem for the girls( for the truth I don't like harem) but anyway he was engage with hinata. And hinata change because of him. And as of Naruto his with Karin. So many Cliff off , and he wanted to protect his family and his love ones . When Orichimaru attack the leaf Village. He help his father in the battle field but then Hinata got killed and he was so furious about it. He's mother and father told him to calmed but he can't. Because they killed Hinata. And after that he revived hinata and the other village wants him to Marry another woman. But his father set a plan on how Hinata agree to it. Then Hinata told Sora to marry her little sister because her family wants to marry her sister to a pig person. So Sora agree to it for Hinata's sake.

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djdjdn

Its a great story and has a lot of potential. Writing errors, yes, but the story and plot make up for it. There is a lot of errors when it comes to the gender such as saying she when it's suppose to be him. A couple of times some sentences are structured incorrectly or don't make sense. However, the character development, fight sences, and overall world building are great. I am excited for the future updates. My condolences to your recent loss.

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Melshan

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎

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Ove1230

This is perfect man I was looking for something like this and this is it thanks man th gammer is good the writing style is good and the word placement is god